Simply put, I loved it.
The characters were well-rounded, the plot had a good theming sense to it. The ending was fantastic and very satisfying. Brilliant job

I was willing to give Amanda quite a bit more forgiveness for her past transgressions than what lines up with my personal morals but... yikes. I do feel a bit bad for her losing the part but like... I don't respect people who get on top through insincere means in the first place.
And also, y'know, she just *hit someone with a car* jfc

Also Max is terrifying in the most intriguing way but we already knew that.

YOU TELL HER CHARLIE! HECK YEAH!

Charlie would wear one of those "I love my gay daughter" t-shirts agshdhfhfjj

ohhhhh goodness. Haru's in troubllllle.

But also my children are together and communicating so uh I can't be *that* upset.

Pausing during Chapter 10 again to say... the press is definitely gonna get on this, huh? It's been foreshadowing something upsetting being leaked to the public for quite a bit... I'm scared... oh no...

pausing this chapter (chapter 10, idk if shows which chapter you leave reviews on) to say I freaking LOVE Max and I think she's the best written OC I have ever read. Bless her heart. If I were in that position having a friend like her would mean so so much... bless.

Pausing during the dock scene to write this because I'm just! full of emotions! they're actually talking! damn! ! ¶π‼ππ‼⁇ My heart⁉ can't handle this

GOD i love how much I'm frustrated at this agsgfhfh

Oof, Amanda's attitude towards Alan really stirred some memories in me. I resonate with that... I'd be overprotective of my friends too in that situation. I wonder if something happened to Amanda before...?

Agh! The sheer pulse of frustration when Michi ran into Haru! Horrible! Thank you!

You should've heard me cussing at the screen whenever Alan touched on the subject of Haruka. Slow burns are soooo frustrating, which is why I read them, cuz I must be a masochist.
God I love Irish accents and I'm happy you've given me an opportunity to picture one so much.
Also hell yes for Bi!Michi rep uwu

I wish I had seen this sooner! This story is amazing!

Una historia muy linda grasias por compartirla.

So, I'm not new to Sailor Moon, but I'm new to this ship, and I've been dying to find some fanfic to feed a new craving. I was getting pretty tired of moving through story after story, but I decided to give your fic a shot, and holy crap, am I happy I did. This is easily the best HaruMichi fic I've read yet. Where do I even begin? You made the side characters so real and believable that I genuinely felt for them when everything went down. And your ability to balance a (very legitimate) plot was great - to drag out how often Haruka and Michiru didn't see each other made me so happy when they were finally reunited. I don't know how tough this was for you to write, but I'm so happy you stuck with it the way you did and made it what it was. I can't wait to read the rest of your work. Well done!

Sincerely yours Angelsheart85

...and any subject. Your story, dear, is one of the best puece of writing ever written! And i m saying that as a person who started reading at the age of three and whose best friends books were ever since!

Such a perfect, flowless composition, such intercinnection of everythung thatvhappened to all of the characters... I dont know if u have plannned this ff for a ling time... But i actually still have a feeling this actually flowed out of u...
The wording, the language, ... Well i think i really am agsin speechless and i think i again cannot find the words to express all I want!

I just really hope u are a real life writer and u pursue writing in real life!

I thank yoj profoundly all over again after all these years for writing this and gifting us with such a gift! Thank you thank you thank you!

Hey there! Its 2016th now and here i am with your story again! Abd i see that all i left as a comment all those years ago is that i d been left speechless... Which had been and still is true! But at the same time what i hax said back then was not enough... Bwcause what i wanted to say back then was a lot of things, just like now, but i was scared whatever i said couldnt be good enough of a praise... Though i still feel that way, but this time let me try...

I remember reading through chapters like obsessed, but at the same time so carefully, slowly, drinking from ypur lines like from the fountain of life it seems, because every word of ypur story was and even today is life. I felt the same way now like i used to feel back then while reading...

Dear, there had never been a better HM story written, but your fiction goes beyond that, being just good inthe fanfiction category... Ypur story is surely one of the best if not the best in the whole of the fanfiction world, wrotten about any couple, any story line