Reviews for Kurama's Sword
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 5 . 7/30/2019
What the hell?
laurajustin chapter 5 . 7/11/2019
Great story! Can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/10/2018
Why would he need the sword sealed into a scroll, THEN sealed into a seal on his body? Why not just either seal it into his body ALONE OR just have it out? After all shouldn't EVERYBODY get used to seeing him with the sword? It's like seeing thor with mijonir, or green lantern with the ring, or wonder woman with the lasso, you NEVER see one without the other. You EVENTUALLY JUST ADAPT.. yes it's a WEAPON, yes it's EXTREMELY DESTRUCTIVE.. BUUUT the two are BOUND, the man and the weapon are ALWAYS TOGETHER. To be around the person, is to be around the weapon...

Jiraiya teaching espionage? ROFL.. Talk about the "blind leading the blind!" ROFL...Jiraiya couldn't "spy" his way out of a broom closet! GAI would have about an even chance with that! (he let two armies sneak into his own village with a deranged jinchuriki, let the kazekage get murdered and orochi formed an entire VILLAGE, all that HE DIDN'T NOTICE.. That's not a spy, that's an incompetent!) I don't know what the term is for "BEYOND bad at your job" but he fits the bill.
Guest chapter 3 . 10/10/2018
Well, get rid of orochi and this is a pretty good idea.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2018
Well not bad, but traitors still need to be traitors, the uchiha still NEED to be dead (I fail to see how authors don't see that as a necessity) and as for naruto's mom? Sure if it's done right, give her back to him.. But the whole FOCUS should be naruto.. Everyone else? "stage dressing"...Which only makes sense. He's ROYALTY, the only REAL royalty in konoha(as in "divine right"), he's also the ONLY jinchuriki... THIS puts him at a unique status that NOBODY (not even the uchiha) enjoys... NOBODY ELSE can replace or "stand-in" for him, he is quite literally ABOVE THE LAW. The extra power, just further PROVES MY POINT!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2018
Good story, orochimaru? SCREW UP, but salvageable, just not THIS STORY.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2018
Well kinda two things, number one orochi should NEVER be brought back into the fold, it's like when someone is BORN WRONG, like sasuke, just KILL THEM and get over it(if people are BORN GOOD, then occasionally SOMEONE'S GOTTA BE BORN JUST WRONG, not able to be saved, it's the flip side of the coin).. I might steal a LOT of this (granted not ALL of it, because some I think could be trimmed), but I'd love to kind run with it.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2018
Never really understood that whole "splitting" the chakra thing anyway, isn't that just a REALLY GIANT hurdle of a problem? And also what was the point? If obedito could never extract the kyuubi before unless the vessel went into labor then doesn't naruto kinda supersede that from the jump? Kinda makes splitting it a MOOT point doesn't it? Like A LOT in this series it makes me go "huh"?.. THIS COULD HAVE BEEN DONE A LOT BETTER.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2018
Well this is very keeping with mythos... Arthur isn't much without Excalibur... Lion-o not much without "the sword of omens"... He-man not much without the "sword of greyskull", So it's a good fit... Just be careful.

In modern myths (inuyasha without tetsigai? KINDA WIMPY, Kain without the soul reaver) Yeah a man NEEDS his di... Um SWORD.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2018
Homura and koharu are detrimental to the village PERIOD, I fail to see how the three of them talking is MORE detrimental.. It's like cd's vs. mp3s.. OR dvd vs. blu ray... One is the OLD way (those two idiots) and one is the NEW way, if you want to survive? Your village adapts.. If not? You listen to them and go EXTINCT, not really a big decision (he's of their generation, but he's supposed to THINK ahead, otherwise ONE OF THEM would be hokage not him)I never understood how this was a big conflict in a lot of stories.
Fanficlover2017 chapter 5 . 8/4/2018
While your story is good and I applaud your creativity, you have depicted a much darker Hinata than was necessary. I understand wanting her to be more confident but this is overkill.
Monster King chapter 5 . 7/10/2018
Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.
kerry.wallace40 chapter 5 . 2/6/2018
Pls is it possible to change a little bit of this chapter you can keep most of her attitude and what not but that whole torture spin is no what I want to see done to hinata.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 5 . 10/31/2017
I wondered what happened to Hinata to Distance from Naruto ? :O
yuzukikuran476 chapter 4 . 10/31/2017
yep this story is getting Interesting to read :)
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