And this one I also love! I love how you write the four of them, looking out for their father, and the interactions between everyone you write really well. Love it!

I really like those types of fanfiction! Please make more chapters!

Hey!
Again, amazing!
Oh how much I hate war :/

Alicia :)

I loved both this story and its companion. Thank you, and I hope to find more of your stories.

I like it. This was amazing. How Pevensies (if by chance) were meeting John in night. This was funny.

Wow such compassion :)

Wonderful! I liked this very much :) I like see their maturity and love towards their parents as a part of Aslan's plan. I like to read stories where their wisdom is put to good use in aiding others. Very well done. Keep writing!

Aww, that's sweet.

I liked this:

"Daddy?" Lucy asked one night, playing up all the cuteness that a ten year old could muster. "Why are you so sad?"

I could just see her turning on "the cute" to get through to him. :)

Wonderful!

I really liked it. I loved how all of them told him to go talk to Peter. Cause yeah, Peter would understand wouldn't he?

I read both your one shots, and I'd figured I'd review both at the same time, simply because I can say that both were absolutely fantastic.

One thing that stood out for me was how realistic your portrayal of the characters was. There was actual depth to not only the Pevensie kids, but their parents were suprisingly complete, especially considering how little space you ended up using.

The familial dynamic was really good as well- it wasn't overbearing like some stories I've seen, but it was obviously an affectionate realtionship between everyone involved.

Overall, I loved both of them, and thanks for a good read XD

Awesome!

I don't think Mr Pevensie has been given a name, either. Fan fic writers don't seem to have settled on one,either. John is a good one.

Great! Thanks for writing, and thanks for sharing with us. (And please add a disclaimer.)

This is a very beautiful story. I know a lot of people write about what happened when they got back from Narnia, but your story is especially good. Your portrayal of the Pevansies through the eyes of their father is just how I imagine it would be.