| Reviews for Indisputable |
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   PiccoloFan69 chapter 30 . 2/25/2018 Plsss make a sequel!, i want to know if Chris can go super saiyan!, or do Namekian things! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/14/2016 WTF piccolo is not frigging 14ft tall he is like 7"5 what the crap also Vegeta is like 5"6 so yeah like 2 feet bruh |
| Anon chapter 21 . 12/5/2015 I don't think I can read this anymore, this story started out promising with the interactions by the lake; things were moving at the correct pace, folk were IC for the most part, and I was looking forward to the development of the relationship. But with the death of Bulma, things started to move way too fast, Vegeta got over her in the space of a few hours it seemed, and then many gaping holes began to surface one after another... Why didn't they just revive Bulma with the dragon balls? Why the appearance of this random self-insert OC saiyan for no reason? Piccolo fused with Nail, so how is it he's suddenly in Piccolo's room? Namekians are hermaphrodites so surely if anyone's getting pregnant it would be Piccolo as he had the ability to begin with. Too OOC and AU for my tastes. |
| shadowcat ninja chapter 22 . 9/20/2015 geta, that's the stupidest thing I've ever heard leave your mouth. The normal Saiyan gestation period is 7 months, and for Namekians it's 3 months, so I'm guessing this pregnancy will last about 5 months U got the math wrong 7 months - 3 months only 4 months for the pregnancy |
| Guest chapter 30 . 1/20/2015 OF MAH GERD! THIS IS THE BEST THING IN THE WORLD! I DON'T USUALLY REVIEW BUT WHEN I DO IT MEANS THE FANFICTION WAS WORTH REVIEWING! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS! |
| Lavonya chapter 26 . 1/13/2014 O_O *_* x_x you... you killed me from all this sweetness... . |
| Lavonya chapter 25 . 1/13/2014 HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! |
| Lavonya chapter 24 . 1/13/2014 Well... at least he ain't eating 'Pickled Frog-legs'... *shudders* I read that in a fanfic and the author actually had that craving... disgusting... |
| Lavonya chapter 23 . 1/13/2014 Vegeta Hormones Temperamental Crybaby... heeeeeeheeeeeee |
| Lavonya chapter 22 . 1/13/2014 Hormones make you stronger!Coooooooooooooool! |
| Lavonya chapter 21 . 1/13/2014 that... is so sugary sweet it's cute! |
| Lavonya chapter 20 . 1/13/2014 Heeeeeeeeeeeheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeheeeeeeeeeee! |
| Lavonya chapter 19 . 1/13/2014 One of the greatest M/M too! |
| Lavonya chapter 18 . 1/13/2014 CAUTION! WARNING! PROTECTIVE BROTHER ALERT! HEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEEEHEEEEEEEEEE |
| Lavonya chapter 17 . 1/13/2014 The day is just full of surprises... ain't it? |
