Adorable and beautifully written. I myself am an avid fan of the Magoichi/Gracia dynamic. My favorite thing about their relationship is that it is so innocent (most probably due to her youth and naivety when they first meet), which is so unlike the way Magoichi treats all other women. I would so very much enjoy reading more of this story-I'm curious to see if their relationship develops further, as I always suspect that it would have. You are a brilliant writer-keep it up!

An update :D Yay!

I already like Makoto - he actually seems to fit into the story, as opposed to many other OCs. I actually wondered whether he was a real person or an NPC somewhere in the games for a moment.

And it is really nice to see you fleshing out the plot of the fic :D

Good job!

Wow! Another wonderful chapter! After reading Gracia's interaction with Mago, and being reminded that Tadaoki did, indeed, sentence his wife to die, all I can hope is that Gracia ends up with Magoichi. She belongs with him much more than she does with Tadaoki. After all, Magoichi protects Gracia while Tadaoki was going to have Gracia killed.

I like Makoto. He's very logical and I just love how he thinks and speaks. He's a very good OC :D

I also hope Tadaoki, if he finds Gracia, won't be able to take her back home. I'm really, really, really rooting for Magoichi and Gracia to have a happy ending together.

Though, just curious, are you going to stay true to history and allow the Eastern forces to win, or are you going to allow the Western forces to win? (since Tadaoki is gone, and everything) I'm not gonna lie, I'd love you FOREVER if you let Mitsunari win, but that's just because he's my favorite male character in Samurai Warriors :p I don't really care either way, though :D

Anyways, wonderfully awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Awesome job!

I'd like to squeal and scream and jump up and down all at once. I LOVE YOU for writing this story. Gracia is my favorite character in Samurai Warriors and I always wondered about how they ended her story. She never told Mago yes or no if she would go back to her old life. I had always hoped that she would run away with Mago and live happily ever after with him.

I loved everything about this story. Tadaoki's personality, Gracia, Mago, everything. I really hope you update soon! This is such an awesome, amazing, wonderful story!

God, this is adorable, if kind of...sad. I was always curious about the aftermath of Gracia's story-line and this fic satisfies this craving, though I like Magoichi's and Gracia's relationship more when platonic. But I don't mind at all in this case because you really got their dynamic down.