Pretty well-written. A few typos here and there, but the characters were pretty in character.

I'm patiently hoping for a next update, so please continue!

~Merrill

wow...just, wow. terrific start!

Impy again lol

You were worried...why? This is kick ass and perfectly in character. When he was writing the letter was to a T, is there more? Please continue

Wow, this is so powerful... and so in-character! I love it, even though I love Radar and it's sad, still... gripping.

Not Radar! This is off to a good start. I'd like to see where it's going to go...keep writing!