You have done well to illustrate the terror that most would feel when they realize that they're gradually losing themselves.

this is just, amazing

heartbreakingly amazing and I wish there was more, a moment where someone helps him or something
but this is perfect as it is

Woah that hurt, and it was sad, but feels exactly like how the bleeding effect would be. You loose yourself until nothing is left, and Desmond doesn't like others knowing his burdens until he has a break down. Thank you for writing!

this made me so sad...

Wonderful story! So beautifully describes the bleeding effect and exactly what I've been searching for! I love it!

a facet of the bleeding affect I haven't seen explored before. and God you did it well. broke my heart in the process.

Wow. It was… wow. Seriously. I don't know the english for this, but, seriously, that was profond, douloureux, absolument angoissant, étouffant et noir… Wonderful. I adored it.

Wow. Fantastic writing, thrilling story. Thx for writing this!

this is so painful to read, poor Desmond! i really feel for him man

One hell of a case of MPD, nie? Bleeding over effect devastates... these types of fics are always poignant. This was no exception. Thank you for sharing with us!

That was haunting. Wow, poor Desmond. You wrote him brillantly.

Very great :)

I am very impressed with your exploration of Desmond's psychic breakdown. The conflict between selves (if we could call it that) is fascinating, and you've done an incredible job here of capturing desperation and loss. Excellent work.

Honey, that was gorgeous. There's always a thrill to see how a depressing prompt is executed; and justice you did. Watching Desmond slowly peel, and fall, and break-it's frightening. However, despite the helplessness one feels, it's just as beautiful. Ha, that sounds terrible, but you deserve it. Kudos.

I love stories about how the Bleeding Effect effects Desmond. They're just so... interesting. Especially this one, its really, really good.

~Vithian