when’s the next one coming?

LMAO

Not kinky enough

So sad to see it end. and i was loving the whole "forbidden love" their connection was kind of sweet
if you would be interested in continuing this story or writing a new Delta X Eleanor would be awesome... good story either way :D

Did they land on Isla Nublar ? hahah that's brilliant.
Perfect spot for them to unwind from the craziness that is Rapture. And not many humans to try and capture and experiment on them yet. Depending on timeline etc.
ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Honestly I love bioshock and what you do I love this and this may be old but could you make more please I'm loving the whole "get out of rapture" thing going on your great at this I believe in you good luck on your next one

This is amazing

Would you kindly?

It ain't really Eleanor messing with Delta's feelings as a Big Daddies only roll in life is to protect and make the little sisters happy. So blame the programmers, not Eleanor. To be frank.

Anyways, update soon and keep up the good work.

Jurassic Park

Why did you abandon this D

Pls pls pls update. Things are just starting to clear up and we want to know what happens next pls pls pls update

Seriously? The guy from Jurassic park? That is so... AWSOME!

I like spiders. ('-')

Interesting story so far , the inclusion of system shock 2 in the last chapters is an interesting twist, you should really continue it