Reviews for Naruto of the Red Leaf
Monster King chapter 14 . 11/8/2018
Great story a shame you gave up on it
dmafia ruler chapter 8 . 2/27/2017
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Iamme chapter 14 . 11/24/2016
Ive become a huge fan of Puppet Master Naruto fan fics, and i was really hoping you would put out more chapters, maybe theyre on a different site? but if not please dont just stop, its really good
arinasution5 chapter 14 . 11/5/2016
Hn
Guest chapter 4 . 2/3/2016
Not sure if you did it on purpose but in Canon weren't the genin tests at 11 years old?
Gaara dies chapter 14 . 12/14/2014
Gaara dies
And they find Itachi dead
Animemonk chapter 14 . 12/5/2014
I have an idea for a puppet that is not a human puppet though. you can deside the gender and all the physical features but I have an idea for an ability of a special puppet narutp culd make with certain weapons he can have made for it. I will start with the weapons since it is easier and makes it so you see the overall theme of the puppet. one or two snake swords or swords that look completely normal but are segmented by a highly durable and flexible group of thick metal wire that each segment has rolledinside and when swung with a certain flick of the wrist disconnects the blade showing the segments and the razor sharp wire inside allowing the weapon to be used as a extremely deadly and misconceiving weapon usually tricking opponejts into thinking it is a normal sword when it turns into a whip allowing for about mid range attacks with ease and then can easily retract into the sword for a more short range and melee fight. also with the ands being specially designed snake daggers where the fingers can all connect into a blade that comes apart in segments allowing a very limited last dich attack for that though also has a bigger wire connecting the wrists to the arms allowing for a bit more range though no quite as much blade due to the bigger wire not being nearly as sharp but the hand as a segmented dagger at the end of a large wire whip. the puppet itself is a big how should I say it. a snake puppet it can segment itself almost at every joint with the wires connecting the parts being extremely sharp (other than the wrists) and being able to control the exact motions of it at that stage allowing for a human cheesewire or death wire prison wrapping around up to 3 enemies at once and holding onto them reconnecting to the utmost part where any struggeling from the captured captives causes almost certain fatal wounds due to the wire instantly cutting through them like a hot knife through butter depending on how much they struggle the deeper the cut, all weapons being poisoned. also with the wig being what looks like hair through is extremely strong but extremely sharp wires that can be used as multiple whips at point blank range causing the entire puppet to be a weapon every single part and regardless of gender has hair down to their lower back. the only seals for fighting wise would be turning all of the razor wires into extremely hot wires or electrified or extremely cold but not brittle. in the tongue of the puppet is a igh powered cannon that fires extremely small slivers of extremelt sharp metal that leaves almost no mark at all from cutting and moves so fast it is only seen as what seems to be a thin glimmer and has enough force behind it to go through any non armoured clothes and through any bone not hardened by a bloodline or such
Guest chapter 7 . 3/5/2014
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Guest chapter 7 . 12/6/2013
a little advice for you, just because something sounds nice for a story doesn't mean it should be in the story, read through your story a think about that statement would you.
Void chapter 14 . 12/1/2013
Noooooooooooooo! Curse you cliffhangers!
hagone uchiha chapter 14 . 9/27/2013
Hi this is Hagone I wanted to say i love your puppet story as i am a big fan of puppet useing naruto stories. I have a suggestion on a puppet naruto should use if you have seen black butler then you probably know who sebastion is. it would be an wounderful puppet for naruto to use best wishes hagone uchiha
Mat chapter 14 . 9/16/2013
Plz finish this store plz
David Archangel chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
Are you going to continue. This story I really hope so its my absolute favorite
David Archangel chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Plz continue I'm like. In love with this story
Anime Fan 295647 chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
wow
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