An alternate universe where Chloe and Ollie come together and talk and sex it out. Letting some one in is the hardest thing in the world. They are both up for the challege. I am a huge Chlollie shipper.

Such a healthy hookup! Seriously if people actually talked post sex it would be such an aid to resolution of angst.

The convo was intense, but the HOTTNESS was definitely an eyeopener. lol

Thanks for sharing.

I freaking love these two.

there were some really amazing lines in this... the whole lead up from the beginning about her space and nervousness was so real you could feel it.

"She wondered why the great cathedral window couldn't be cracked open. God knew how hot and thick the air was in here." - something about the cathedral to the god reference made it like a personal plea, beautiful.

the whole captialism/imperialistic pig portion was so light during something so heavy -then - "A few posters of him shirtless could accomplish more in five minutes than the CIA had managed in decades." perfect

I really liked all of it. their characters were both very harsh, but they never gave up never turned away...cause in the end what matters is that you stay... nice work!

pretty intense. great dialogue and pacing.

thanks for sharing it.

Wow. You really hit all the right pieces here with Chloe's issues and Oliver's issues and every issue regarding Chloe that Smallville avoids like a plague.

I love that in comparison to all the other relationships Chloe's had, the atmosphere here is very mature and extremely hot. :D

I also love the way you write, very gripping and we're totally there with the emotional roller coaster that Chloe is going through.

I've always wondered why Chloe doesn't train. I wish she does in Smallville...

wow! I really enjoyed reading this :) I think you've managed to capture chloe's and ollie's personas really well here. I especially like your interpretation of Chloe's reaction to Oliver's behaviour.. It's exactly how I'd imagine her to be in a situation like this.

Great writing! I really hope to read more chlollie fics from you soon :)