wow what a story you have here, started reading the whole thing befor i left you a reveiw wow kim and ron holding out ron has lost his mmp hanna has a sister and all hell is about to break lose when the head has to go to ground good luck getting all this done in 3 more chapters boss
FFT
ajw1970

Will you finish this story?

Finish this fic. Like now. It's awesome.

That *was* a heavy chapter. A lot of heartache and confusion for the kids, but nicely tied together. I hope the next chapter has a cheerier atmosphere, or, at least, a cheerier ending. But if you need time to let the creative juices flow, I say, "Take all the time you need." The faithful have waited this long; to quote Gerry from ToyStory2, "You can't rush art."

I use a ToyStory reference because of, "someone poisoned the water hole". Seriously? A reference like that at a time like that?

By the way, isn't it supposed to be "Possible-chan"? I thought "san" was strictly for boys.

As for the connections you made, "compacted" would be a better word than "stretched". I always thought Master Sensei seemed more like a grandfather than a sensei to Yori, but an uncle?

And how about that, Will Du found someone who can tolerate him. XD

Wait, if Rufus could transform the blade, why couldn't Master Sensei? Didn't he still have MMP?

And apparently Ron's parents missed it when Yori said, "She will *remain* with her family". Weren't the Stoppables the family she'd been with up till that point?

Well, as always, I look forward to more. Keep 'em coming. :)

P.S. I do remember "Reading Rainbow". It's been forever since I've seen it, though. But as for their website and app, may God Bless them!

Some dire days ahead for Team Possible and GJ, but there's still something going on that only Yamanouchi, and by that I mean Sensei, are not telling anybody. Wonder what's going on at GJ to force this as it has, but in time I'm sure it will come to light. The matter is when and under what circumstances?

Ron's MMP is gone? But Rufus will have to be a very well kept secret from Fist, and others like him. Wonder if Ron will get his MMP back? Though he's more savvy now, I hope Kim doesn't fall back on old habits of protecting him...

CB73
Glad to see you back in the saddle again. Now if I could do so myself...LOL!

FINALLY! Hallelujah and praise the Lord, the Gecko has returned at last. We got a lotta insight into the Yamanouchi stuff, Ron's lack of MMP will probably turn him back into a bumbling oaf at least to some degree. His martial arts stemmed from the MMP so now he's back to running and screaming like an idiot. Personally, I don't expect Ron to get it back ever, that's just the vibe I'm getting here. I hope I'm wrong, but despite the "hope" you described Sensei having, I don't see it happening. Yori is technically Ron's sister now too, you had Kim tell Ron not to think too hard because you didn't want US to think too hard probably lol. Global Justice is still the one part of this whole mess I still have no clue what's going on. If Gerhardt is firmly on the side of evil now, I can't begin to figure out what the problem could be in GJ, unless it has something to do with those other characters in the next story. Is GJ trying to make a new Team Possible that's totally loyal to them or something? Whatever the case, I hope to see another update from you soon. Glad to hear you finally managed to bash through that writer's block.

Ok, I feel like I gotta try and get your attention again...and please don't take me as nagging but as me trying to remind an incredible author of exactly what he's left hanging for about a year and a half now...this story is not good, it's not great, it is THE BEST KimXRon story I have ever read anywhere on the internet. Think about that for a moment, I'm not just saying this because I want you to continue, that isn't my style.

In one sentence, I have not only compared you to the likes of authors such as Mahler Avatar, cpneb, screaming phoenix, and even the incredible Commander Argus who in my honest opinion (sorry Mahler) was the only author whose stories I've read have even come CLOSE to being on your level...I have also stated you in fact are far beyond them as far as understanding the characters, making stories for them to deal with, and using the appropriate grammar necessary to not make them sound robotic while at the same time not making them overly animated and cartoonish.

With your writing style, I can truly relate to these characters, sympathize with them, celebrate with them, and you've created a perfect mixture of real life and fantasy world so that we can still picture them being in the world we live in without putting so many restrictions on them so that they can only go to certain places. This is the most easily noticed when you're bringing up the college football games and making names for the teams (some exist in real life and some don't).

You've managed to do everything right and I can't think of anything that I would change about your story...with that being said however, there is one thing I would change...the fact that you haven't updated yet. Like I mentioned when I messaged you, my fellow author, I can perfectly understand the need to take care of real life situations first and foremost, my own writing has suffered immensely because of the responsibilities that have been placed on my shoulders over the past year and a half, and my readers have had to live with it...but after a certain amount of time, it would be nice if readers knew that you haven't completely abandoned this story and all the other stories you have planned in your profile. A small announcement on dA, on this story as a fake chapter just to let people know that you're still working on it.

Do you need help? Are you stumped on something? If so it would be my honor (to quote a phrase) to be able to assist you in getting this story up and running once more. I doubt that's the case, but just know that if you ever need a little help I'll do my best to give it to you. At least let the readers know you're still alive AmericanGecko, a year and a half is too long to leave readers hanging without at least letting them know you haven't forgotten them.

I read this, and it's fantastic. I'm a tad bit late to the party, but not that I've tad both installments, I want to know what happened to the author? I'm not trying to be pushy or demanding, but this has to be the best interpretation of life after graduation. These stories have potential, and I'm sitting here wondering what happened. It's been a year and a half, and I don't want to hear that he quit. I'd hate to have to move on to a new series...

Is it over?

Do what you love and love what you do.
That's one of my 'rules too live by'

Hangovers SUCK!

Love the movie titles

God that reminds me of my football days, I played T.E. for three years, almost 4000 yards, and 37 Touchdowns, then in the first game of senior year iget hit by three players at the same time, four broken ribs, a cracked sternum and a bad concussion, haven't played since. It also flushed away, 6 full ride scholarships...
:(

I new barkin would show up!
I am reform Jewish, I have dealt with people Like that all my life (never the same person twice) you brought it up as part of the story, not as your own personal views (I hope) so I am not offended. Besides we all have one family member like that...

so when will the next update be posted...I think about 10 months is a bit long to wait for an update and I really want to know the story behind Yori being Hana's sister and i know the story isn't over because you put at the end of the chapter that the story isn't quite done...so an update would be extremely appreciated :)