*crying obscenely in background

"WHO'S EVER CUTTING ONIONS SHOULD STOP IMMEDIATELY!"

Damn.. I cried, my heart ached so bad and the Michael greeted him in the end and I was all like sobbing. Seriously good, I love it

Loved this, it is a bleak ending and though you more than do that aspect of the film justice, you also bring the Light. Thanks for the read.

Beautifully work!

This was amazing! Really well written, I was so sad at the end of this movie! I like this adaptation much better :)

Well done!

I like this story alot! Very well written.

You should continue on with it )

~BBWB~

nice ending. better than the movie

I love this! Well done! Way to use the words of the final scene and add to them, and take from them, and make it end so beautifully. Thank you!

This was so beautiful. I was reading as I was watching it again(its still going), and I'm litterally close to tears.

So I would absolutely love to see this continued. It also, from the way you ended it, it has a lot of room and a lot of potential to be an amazing story. I hope you continue it, but its your choice, I'm just casting my vote.

I think that's all... :)

FallenAngel

This is beautiful!

I am glad that Gabriel reunited with Michael in his original form. We might also see that happening in the official script as I have read that the movie is considered a trilogy, so there are more to expect.

If you decide to develop this story further, I will be interested to read a possible continuation.