Reviews for You Give Me Fever |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story idea but threw me for a loop with Amanda. Was expecting a 'true' faberry story |
![]() ![]() dearest author, post a sequel (or 2, or more) for this one pleaseeee... bring up jealous Quinn. it's gonna be HoTT...! faberry, ftw.! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story buddy. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I was wary of reading a fic with Rachel and OFC, but I'm a sucker for femslash. I liked how you kept in the surprise element for the us as well. Great song choice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you Squint... Lol! Its still very good. Personally, you have to Squint, read between the lines, and think. "What is Quinn thinking right now?" I find it quite entertaining. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously sexy. ;) Thanksw for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() F**KING YES! That is all. Oh, and you need to get writing. Seriously. It's bad for my health should you withold your awesome one-shots. It's like a caffeine addiction. Except I don't want it to stop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() While I did enjoy this, it shouldn't be categorized as Rachel & Quinn. So basically, I subbed Quinn in for the Amanda parts. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry...but you've made a BIG mistake and I'm here to help you correct it. Somehow you marked that this story was complete, even though it clearly ISN'T! In fact, I have it on good authority that you're just getting started with this hysterical, right on point, extremely well written story that MUST continue. I'm pretty sure what you meant to do was include details of Amanda and Rachel in the next chapter, along-side of Quinn's reactions to the routine, and then show Quinn falling for Rachel and vise versa. Yes, you are indeed very welcome. I was happy to bring this to your attention. After all, surely a author who can write Rachel Berry so succinctly, while keeping it hilarious yet not so over the top that you can't picture Rachel actually doing or saying those things, but just over the top enough that it adds to the awesomeness of the story...well...I know that you're angry with yourself for making that grievous error when you mistakenly hit "complete" to this thoroughly awesome start of what I know will be a kick ass story. Readers, you can thank me later. I was just doing my civic duty. Hippo-Crat, I'll anxiously be waiting the next update |
![]() ![]() FINISH IT PLEASE! This was fantastically written! At first I was like, "Amanda? Who the hell is Amanda and where is my FaBerry action?" but then I realized what you were doing and I love it! I could picture the dance scene perfectly in my mind. You are very very talented, my friend. Can't wait to see more of this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved It! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay that was awesome. I love the whole story. The bet and how sure the gleeks were that they would win, Rachel, her choice of song and partner, and to top it off the gleeks reaction to the whole thing. Plus Puck commenting on Rachel getting it on is so classic Puck. |