Not bad but needs a lot of work and filling in. Most armor is pointless in Narutos world. Samurai armor rakes most of the users chakra to make it strong. Naruto own chakra level is about 5-8 times Kakashi's. Only with the 9 tails chakra is it powered up by 10-30 times Kakashi's. Chakra armor would eat up 30-40% of Naruto and 10% is the bare minimum for curse seal. So Naruto would have 40-50% of his chakra being eaten. Plus the curse seal would. fall apart due to the 9 tail chakra.

interesting...where's the rest

Wait wait wait... Sasuke is dead. You said so in the first chapter.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story..

You distroyd this store

Venom is actually a LOT more powerful then given credit.. Number one it can do BULLETS (punisher.. what if)... so it can make a GUN from anywhere... 2 it can RECALL any previous hosts.. UM hello, carol danvers...Ms. Marvel... YES it has energy projection! It ATE his progeny, so it has all their powers.. SO.. um acid, venom, blades, projectiles, bludgion weapons, immunity to every TOXIN on the planet, regeneration... etc.. as I said venom is a LOT more powerful then you give it credit for.

You know I've come to realize that most of these fanfics make the third out to be one STUPID MFer' I mean YES he did the bone headed thing of telling the population about naruto (which was a TRULY stupid move) and yes he rolls over so often that he needs protective clothing. .but then again, his grandson looks like he got off the short buss so how smart do you really think he is? (in general, the only kids that wear helmets are the mentally CHALLENGED, so they don't hurt themselves) ANYWAY, I'd assume that he's at LEAST intelligent enough to keep naruto IN HIS PRESENCE on the one night each year that naruto's hated the most for. You know considering if naruto dies the kyuubi is FREE! NOT giving him to an aid.. not ALLOWING an anbu to look after him, that ONE day a year he should want naruto to stay in HIS PHYSICAL PRESENCE the ENTIRE DAY/NIGHT. he should at LEAST be that smart (after all, somehow he lived to be an old goat.. so he can't be an utter imbecile)

I vote for the sand to crush the emo

Hope you continue it.

Naruto wouldn't have passed my standards I mean lets be honest a nin is supposed to complete his task efficiently quick as possible and as subtle as possible basically quick smart quite he violated all three ideals extended the fight so he could rant, overly flashy and loud, and shows lack of intelligence by showing potently powerful and useful cards rather early! look at the manga Kakashi never revealed until his fight with Susuke that he had the Mangekyō Sharingan! and Naruto would always save his rasengan to end the fight, it was his hidden ace up his sleeve! all I'm saying is he's breaking basic essential rules to being a nin, also you've made a Marty-Stu in a certain sense by making the character unnaturally strong you have made it so that any story is unfound because the shear strength and array of powers, of the main character makes it impossible for there to be a concerning conflict he's obviously so powerful that you already know that no matter the conflict he will succeed making this entire fic centrally flawed... so basically I'm not going to even read one more word of any of your fanfiction you write because this "Garbage" is so simple minded that I shall simply go brain dead if I have to read another word... :)

NO OFFENSE

I do gotta wonder about all the armor, I mean if he's got Venom, he really doesn't need it, and one would think it would actually HAMPER fighting with it on vs. help, he's can't very well call up the costume when he's covered head to foot in metal can he?

5% of Naruto chakura is (in most fanfics) about Mid-High Chunin. Sooo. . . RUN FOR YOUR LIVES (if he hates you of course).

It's good so far and I know it hasn't been updated in a while but here are my Two Cents.

Go back, We need to see the Graduation Night atleast, to see Naruto really fighting, See him grow as a Shinobi, Thats why so many people like the Wave Mission dispite reading it Thousands of time, We see Naruto become a man.

Second Venom should be latched onto Naruto rather than the Kyuubi, or the Seal It should absorb the access Chakra that Pours out the Seal letting Naruto both gain Chakra control and Feeds the Symbiote...

Finally Naruto shouldn't have the Level 2 Curse Mark from just the Orochimaru bite, but I also suggest that Orochimaru grants Naruto the Level 2 Animal Curse Mark (The Same one used by Mizuki in the Filler Episodes) during the Tsunade Search Arc via The Shadow Snake hands, Mostly so he can get the Level 2 Seal, Opens him up to Senjutsu Chakra quicker and we can see Fox Seal Naruto vs Demon Seal Sasuke.

Yes everything will change.
All those who dared to abuse him shall feel his wrath!
Praying for major sasuke,sakura, and civilian council bashing

oh this sounds amazing and I seriously hope you keep it up and update again soon.