Tryna reading this again and the introductions still hilarious as ever

read till like the tenth paragraph: "SUBARU?!"

So it's Kyoya or Mukuro?

I'm liking the writing style. It's... Somewhat different. I like it. Keep up the great work. Tamaki sounds awesome.

I've just finished reading this story and I can say I quite like it! I hope to see more soon!

Can't wait for the next chapter! And is it going to be a mukuroxOC fanfic? Just curious. And I love your OC by the way, and there is definitely no OOC moments from any of the characters. Keep it up!

Bruh... this story is AWESOME! I love that she's a shorty too! It's rare to see characters that are short and can kick major butt! Hopefully you find some time to update this story!

I actually liked your character, though I doubt and really doubt that anyone can pull a stunt like that to Hibari XD I mean the running away, yes but really the pepper spray must've hurt ; n;
(poor hibari) will read this now

great first chapter! I laughed really hard at the pepper spray part, I totally wasn't expecting that!

I think this story's great, and It probably would have gotten better! Funny, great writing style, no mary-sues or OOC characters. Awesomesauce- really. Sucks you aren't updating :(

Please update soon :DD

funny as hell

Good chapter. Please update again soon. :)

lol sorry i didnt review earlier, i wanted to read all of it first :3 and its so good i love tamakis attitude XD she flipped him off XD and please update soon :3

First to review Chapter Five! Yes! I was actually just browsing around, and then I saw your update and I was so happy because I was afraid you would stop updating it, and I'm happy to be wrong.

This is also the first time I'm reviewing Clouds and Discord, so sorry if its a bit… stuffy. I absolutely love Tamaki and her personality! Hibari would probably be interested in her as prey… Actually, Tamaki might be better as a "rival carnivore" since she's a bit prideful and, when it comes to it, she would fight to earn it back. Who knows? She's a bit gullible, obviously, from her talk with Tsuna. I can't imagine how she'd react to the truth… she'd probably demand to be trained at their level, maybe. Hmm…

I really like her interactions with Hibari. Their fight was portrayed well, and I loved the action of it and then how the others crashed it. I still can't believe she was knocked out by Hibird! Haha!

Update soon!

—Anemos