love bro moments

Aww... This scene should've been in the movie. I was so sad when Garsiv died after he just said " Tell me Brother"

This sentence kinda bothered me: "Tus, trying to diffuse Garsiv, set a cautious hand on his shoulder."

To diffuse means to spread over a large area, which I'm very, very sure Tus is not trying to do to his brother. The word you're looking for is probably defuse, as in defusing a bomb.

LOL! That was just epic! ? I love the way you made Garsiv, and Dastan is FUNNY! And yeah, they're both super hawt lol ? This was FANTASTIC! ;

Great fic

God bless

well, I look forward to reading a the piece about apples)

lmfao! this is hallarious ) good job with this!

WRITE THAT APPLE STORY PLEASE! THIS WAS A GREAT STORY AND I WANT TO SEE MORE PLEASEEEE

awwwww! verygood at showing the three together

Good job! I liked this, very amusing.

Eminnis

Yes, yes, yes! That would be an awesome story! This was an awesome story! Garsiv was perfectly in character and the descriptions are awesome... I'd love to give some constructive criticism too, but sadly I couldn't find anything I didn't like... perhaps next time!

Very nice. You've well captured the brothers' bond, here, which was my favorite part of the movie.

This was one extremely well-written piece of fiction. You don't really get any fics that delve deep into the interaction among the Princes of Persia, and yours did a wonderful job of exploring just that.

I definitely look forward to whatever other fics you have up your sleeves and I would love to see more from you. Maybe some companion pieces to the events in the movie, as well as things that come after where it ended.

Either way, looking forward to more. Bravo! :)

That was great! I just saw the movie this morning, and it's AMAZING! One of my favorites, definitely. I love this extra scene you've created, and I definitely want to see your other idea! I hope you post it soon!

oh this is great, i love it! there aren't nearly enough stories about the relationship between the brothers in this section, then again there aren't nearly enough stories period in this section -; more would be great, this was really well written and like i said so not enough stories about them up yet