Well, no offence, I'm not trying to be rude, but now that is the most boring fic I've ever read.
I left it on chapter 11, so may be it's really awesome good and marvellous later but I'm not even curious to know.
It's supposed to be an interesting B/R story but it's not. It's a collection of both lines the plot needs and lines the plot doesn't need at all, lines which lead the story to nowhere, to nothing, just waste of time.
Great idea but nothing more.

This was one of many creepy fanfics that melted my heartand also distracted me from cramming for my maths test and made me miss out on my high school dance, because I was too worried about what might happen to Breach.
YOU SIR HAVE A GIFT. IN ALL THE EPISODES WHERE BREACH WAS SEEN, NEVER HAVE I EVER FELT LIKE I ACTUALLY KNEW HER, THEN WHEN I READ YOUR FANFICTION

XD

I just watched a couple of episodes, and now this. All I have to say is...

KILL THAT NANOPHOBIC BITCH!

And good job at tuggin the heartstrings.

That big blue eyed dog was Ashka. Wasn't it?
She saw his memories with her; I can't find any condiluded reason that she would've had to run away

Can you write a Sqwydd fanfic

Fuck that! Brex forever!

Please...please tell me there's a plot twist and Nomad is alive. Please tell me that Wolfgang sees his family again, that he gets to hold Cari and Ashka. Please it's killing me

NO FUCKING WAY! I had fantasized about Biowulf reuniting with his family, but I didn't actually expect it to happen! Also I'm most like Breach on account of my celestial standing. I'm the most literal Gemini you'll ever meet.
Sweet and loving one moment violent and hateful the next

I loved this chapter. How much do you want to bet me that this line "My loyalty is to Breach," will be in the next chapter. Can you believe that at one point my friend convinced me to dislike breach? Yeah me neither that lasted all of twelve seconds

THEY DID WHAT?! LET ME AT THEM LET ME THE FUCK AT THEM!

Imagine how Frisk must've felt. Lol

*raises hand *

Well, I just loved this, is sooo awesome, and the fact that is complete makes it only better, the caracthers were amazing and pretty good managed, nobody was out of caracther, I loved how you worked whit Breach Psique, and how you'd managed Rex's felings, an amazing work in all the senses, 9.8 out of 10, its perfect, is great, is shiny :3

So this is the first generator rex fanfic that i'm reading and may I just say that so far you are setting the bar petty damn high.