That last one is probably my absolute favorite. Of all of these. Good job, dude. Well done.

It is a crime that no one will dignify this masterpiece of a chapter with a review. You are the second coming of "Swiss Army Knife" in the world of K/18 fanfictions, your hability to capture their personalities, even in an AU universe, is just beyond me. If in another world Toei could choose someone to write an official spin off for them, it would have to be you to do it. Hopefully we can se more of you!

Like how Krillian wonders how Vegeta does the intimidating act despite their similarities X-D Also amusing that they wonder if this is a reaction to all Krillian's trauma
...interesting theory that Bulma got pregnant to try and tie Vegeta down...

Nice touch that Krillian is fully aware that 18 does care for him and this situation...by the fact she has not killed him. Says a lot about her personality

X-D for concerns about the kid hitting its head like Goku, and how little they trust 17. Also about who is writing those books

ahha i lol'd a lot through this chapter! loved it

Oh god what the fuck. I laughed so much with this chapter. XD

I was smiling so much at this. Hehe, so fluffy and funny and crazy. Also long as hell, but still very nice. My face is starting to hurt from smiling so hard at this adorable chapter, haha.

This chapter is among my favorite things written on the Internet. I've read it more than once and every single time I find it just as amazing! Thank you :)

Nice story

This story, or rather stories within a story, was excellent! I really like your style of writing, it's refreshing and unique. At first I was a bit confused because the chapters didn't match up but then I realized they were all different stories in and of themselves XD.

I think you portray Juuhachigou very VERY well. As well as the others. This was a blast to read _

Haha C18 sleepwalking and waking Krilin's pants off... hahahaha

Nice :)

Rofl, "And there's this sex thing I want to try." Lol, everyone heard her and stared. Hilarious. My fav chapter so far.

I love grape soda and magnets better. This was good too.

You must put up a part 2! If you have even a shred of kindness in you, you will put up a part 2! T.T I need to know how this ends! Also this is a very interesting story.

Alright, this is ridiculous.

Nine reviews? Nine people cared enough about your fic to actually say something about it?

It should be more. This story is well-written. That's like a rarity among rarities in the realm of fanfiction!

I mean, this story is phenomenal! The characters aren't always spot-on how they might act in the manga or show, but they're always in private or at their most vulnerable when they act differently, and that's actually a good thing.

Your writing skills make me ashamed of my own, and, my gosh, this fic...I cannot believe the severity of its goodness.

Keep up the good work, my friend. I hope you write for a long, long time.