nice.

Interesting very interesting

To be honest, I was shocked when I read that Rodimus told Hot Shot that he had let lose a D-Con so that Hot Shot would get over his fear of using his flame throwers. Though, it seemed to be radical at first, I realized that it had to be done in order for the young mech to use his powers for good.

Also, this was expertly written and I am very jealous on how you write these fics so beautifully!

-cries- YOU KILLED INFERNO!

But then you had Kup in this, so it makes up for it. X3

YEY HOT SHOT~! You beat the decepticon~!

very long but very good.

you didn't loose the direction of the story either.

*yay*

You worry too much, Consuelo, because the length and content of this story was absolutely fine. Oh, wait, disregard that. It was PERFECT. I envy you. You managed to keep on topic without loosing the emotional value of the story. I love how Hot Shot met the rest of the team and his reaction to being a "mass murderer." While I still prefer the thought of "Team Rodimus" containing Red Alert - and Kup-less - you took the story in your own direction and I'm geniunely PROUD of you for doing your own thing.

You're wonderful.

I can tell you put a TON of work into this and it really was enjoyable. Going through a good hunk of Hot Shot's life and seeing how he deals with his flamethrowers and Rodimus in a good steady pace. I also like how you added in Flareup during the fight. Was that Astrotrain they were fighting? I thought maybe but I wasn't sure...

But yeah. Good work there!