Great story ,I can’t wait to read more of your work
Thank you.
Liz

This fanfiction is fantastic!

This fanfiction is amazing! I love your writing style; I really enjoy it. Thank you for your nice work!

I love this story bravo

This was super fun read! Also well wrote.

please add more chapters

YES!

I thought you would update one more chapter and get a glance of Asami and Akihito with their third child, who would be girl, and them and the twins would so proctetive of her xD But anyways! I love the story! Thanks for sharing _

Love the story!

I want more plz i love it

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*giggles* Troublesome ! the both of them !
But . . . i like them , the lot of them.
*Twothumbsforyou*

That's great babe !

I really like how u went into great detail it really keep me interested but I am a bit curios about a few store lines sorry to number each one it will help me to stay on track so please don't get angery
( 1. why doesn't Akihito referee to ASAMI AS BASTARD ALL THE time thought out the story I guess the word bastard doesn't that mean a child born out of wedlock . but isn't ASAMI''s parents married.
( 2. I know AKA HORMONIES are off meter but to put a knife on ASAMI. I JUST KNEW HE WAS GOING to kill aka. a complete break down rage of jesousely in aka I mitt in was fearful myself.
( 3. I did find myself wanting to actually wanting to see the scan of this seeing TAKABA AND ASAMI PREGNANT. AND the marriage the birth .even seeing them age .
even seeing there twins grow up the possilble that one of the twin may have sexually feels towards the other. when he caught the other engage in sex with a rival gang. HOW IT UPSET HIM. IF THEY DO BECOME INVOLED THEY COULD'NT POSSIBLE LIVE UNDER THEY PARENT'S ROOF UNLESS ASAMI and his twin did that very same thing. so it's in the blood. also one of the twins actendent sees his parents getting it on gets ASAMI SEES HIS SON WATCHING THEM AND BOTH ASAMI and SON GETS TURN ON but aka doesn't see that ASAMI and HIS SON ARE FUELING EACH . THIS MAKE ME THINK OF THE fright night the guy watches the vampire seduce the woman before drinking her blood how sexy sick that would be DAM. I LIKE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE THEY REALLY should give you guys a FANFIC CONTEST TO BE ABLE TO PAIR UP YOUR IDEALS WITH THE ORIGAL WRITERS.
IT MAKES a lot sence aka and AMSAMI DO HAVE SEX ALOT I WONDER THAT SAME THING I VE BEEN READING VIEWFIDER AND takaba is becoming more and more femiety and even his body seems to be changing so why not to find out that he could carry a child it's nice to know that asami loves him faithful and would never cheat on him at lease not with a girl. I could not believe at aka would freak out like that. I could if he caught feilong or soudo. ASAMI IS CLEARLY GAY AND LIKES MALES . AKA is ASAMI SOUL MATE. and ASAMI KNOWNS THIS HE A SMART MAN. ( I know I wrote a lot tell me what you think about the comments thank u

Awww I want more