I was SO delighted to find this story! Pretty much binged the whole thing in one sitting. It is so difficult to find a good Peter/OC fanfic without too much fluff and not enough action. Definitely sad this story is over! I will definitely be reading more of your work :)

Ohhhh my gosh. When that first line of so close come on I DIED. Perfect song choice!

I forgot that you let Vane successfully violate her even if he didn't finish...the fact that you let it happen is despicable.

Susan was only named Queen.
Isabel will be the High Queen upon marriage to Peter.

That was a cute ending!

Overall I really enjoyed this story. I like arranged marriage stories when neither party is interested but they figure out a way to make it work. Thanks for writing such a fun story!

Those are some brutal tactics, Edmund. Whatever works though.

[Women," Edmund muttered, "all they think about is dresses and wardrobes."

"You should be glad that we do, Edmund," Lucy said, smiling, "Otherwise none of us four would have been in Narnia."

"Please! All 'that' wardrobe contained was furry coats," Edmund snorted. "And you did not go in there because you loved your girly dresses, you went to hide in there.")

This made me chuckle.

The whole hide and seek scene with the siblings was adorable. And Edmund’s hilarious quip at the end. XD

Did she not think to mention the dead guards? That’s evidence beside her word...

Also you can be “not a Mary Sue” and also not a wife-beater.

I hate Peter now.

Peter and Isabel were both being assholes I. The beginning but the way they sorted it out was really reasonable and realistic.

I wonder why Susan is being so stubborn.

They kiss at last!

Why would Peter refuse the cordial?

Forgave him? Wasn’t expecting that.

You’ve really kept the suspense up.

Lenora was mentioned before, right...? Maybe she saw the light.

So, Susan and Caspian are finally friends again and more. Cute.

That’s really impressive that you wrote that in 27 minutes.

Yeah, poor Caspian. But it wasn’t a great time to confess when Susan has so much to worry about already. And kissing her without asking was definitely no bueno. I can see how Isabel’s strength is in her empathy, her willingness and ability to understand people, friend and foe alike.