Reviews for Secrets |
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![]() ![]() If you don't like how this story is written you can always rewrite the story. :) I personally love this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um...Where next chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Update... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, it seems that the nations have to discuss something important, and Gilbert needs to find his bird, so the kids have been left to their own devices. This seems unusual for them, seeing as they are adults and don't exactly want the kids to find out about them - even saying stay out of closed doors isn't going to stop the curious (like Lambo) from looking. I wonder if Reborn is putting clues together. Gokudera had a point about the land, maybe he'll figure that these people are rich/important. Can't wait to learn more! I wonder if the Vargas' know about the Vongola in the Mafia. That'd be an interesting reaction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, if you don't mind, can I sort of "borrow" the story plot? Although it'll probably take a long time to get this story written but I have an idea. I'm not going to completely copy you so yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did anybody else sing along when hibird started singing the namimori anthem? |
![]() ![]() Updates more updates please!!!!! Your story is very interesting !!! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was an awesome story... kinda sad its discontinued... |
![]() ![]() Nagisa...what is this? NAGI! As in Chrome? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Satol! It's a pity that you lost the motivation for this great story, but I kinda understand how you feel. I also lost my sense of writing when I was studying for my Mid-years. It was hard to get back, but I managed to. Anyways, i'm glad the characters are the same as how their respective authors created it, and i just simply love the storyline. I do think that the usual information process should go through Reborn, but Hibari's side is interesting, too. And please excuse me for saying this, but I keep imagining kid Tsuna in this story. It's weird, but I don't seem to see the middle school Tsuna in my head. It's just me, though. :) By the way, I would just like to ask if I could re-write this story again. How about it? This storyline's awesome and I find it sad to just leave it here. Of course, you don't have to accept my petition (LOL I sound soooooo formal here:P), but if you do, then I may take out parts here and there, but I'll credit the entire original storyline back to you! We could even do it as a collaboration! :D Hope to hear from you soon? ANYL |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome~ I'm not very familiar with Hitman, but I'm definitely hooked on this story! Please update soon~! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Now I absolutely can't wait for the next update to this story!~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() :3 still a awesome story :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's okay... you're already a good job *thumbs up* |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's ok ;;v;; keep on writing good stories like this, ok? |