Awesome.

Little milf lemon with some anti-Moka, nice.

hey can you do a tsukune/ Kahlua lemon as well as a tsukune/kurumu's mom plus a tsukune/keito or akasha lemon please. I would appreciate that very much if you did that.

Wow that was harsh. But then again when you sleep around on people and try to pass it off as rape you pretty much get what you deserve.

This is the first time I've seen Moka play the role of a vixen with little to no regard of the consequences of her actions. If her intent was to cause Tsukune great pain well then mission accomplished. Although the fact that the mother of Mizore would be the one to comfort him came out of left field but tell you the truth I'm happy to see Tsukune make out with someone other than the usual suspects.

Tsurara is a character that's rarely utilized in fics but I'm glad the author decided to go outside the comfort zone and let Tsukune get it on with Mizore's smoking hot mother. Now only if more authors would take your path and feature more pairings not often seen in the RosarioVampire universe. Thank you for taking the first step in a brave new world. Looking forward to more of these types of pairings in the future.

Until next time, SV33out!

Make a sdd smutty oneshots with tsukune x tsunara

Hot.
Very, very hot.

You ended it like it was him that cheated on her... sooo was it him who was wrong or...?

i really like this story i have a request to aske pleas make a story where tsukune is sent back in time to where Tsurara and Ageha were at the school and Tsukune show up at the school and moka and the others girls fight over hime and Tsurara and Ageha end up with hime ps. tell sum other writers they may like the idea as well

that was great just wish there was more.

OK, so i'm generally not a lemon fan. I am reading your work because of a recommendation by a friend.

Ok so in this story, my obvious distaste of lemon fics aside I really do like your style. Very well laid out sentence structure and good imagery. As you stated yourself the characters are out of their.. uh.. character,Thats inconsequential.

"but there was no question to Tsukune that she had an odd, extremely blissful look on her face. And if he remembered correctly, smiles meant happiness"

I like the contrast and the flow of this line, it shows your creative flare and tosses a bit of humor into the works.

Anyhow now i'm off to go take a look at your other stuff. *waves*

I like it. :P

Moka stared at these two. She was about ready to cry. Her Tsukune, the one who would always be there for her, had left her for another woman. A yuki onna, to be precise. She ran away.

You end it like it was Tsukune who cheated on her. Any clarification?

A decent oneshot, but you should have worked a little harder to develope the situation. You moved a little fast.

Wasn't that bad but thanks to the out of character Moka i read without interest from then on. Also the lemon was short and it could of saved it for me. Then again i am pretty picky when it comes to lemon, anyway just a different story for Moka and a more detailed lemon could of saved it for me.

Its my first time seeing a TusukunexTsurara fic its not bad at all , I must say that its quite interesting, this wasnt bad at all but you could have made it a bit more longer :D

Man this is good, keep it up