Reviews for Distracted
princeselisa chapter 36 . 3/30/2017
I'm really enjoying this story. Is there going to be more to come?
Hawke 1234321 chapter 24 . 2/1/2017
This chapter was going to be SO GOOD... and then you ruined it.
Bella was smart enough to trick Jasper and Alice in the Airport, and while she was duped herself by James, she was still able to come up with so many clever things over the course of the series, the way to see the visions of Edward, the trick to have Renesme and Jacob protected by Alice and Jasper, even when Alice couldn't see them, and so many other things, so why in this did Alice have to remind her about the hairspray and handbag thing? And she did it SO BLUNTLY, if I were James, I would have seen right through it the way she phrased it.
Otherwise, I love the story, I love the plotline, I love the way you have captured the characters, without overplaying their vices like the books do with Emoward and Bella as a character being completely oblivious to stuff we read between the lines.
ANYWAY! On to the next chapter...
Cullen's fan chapter 36 . 3/21/2016
is there going to be more ch to come
TheSpunkRansom chapter 36 . 1/14/2016
I loveeee this! Hopefully you'll update again? :)
InsomniousInk chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
I have been following this story for what seems like a decade, and I cannot express how much I am in love with it. Having left fanfiction a while back, I lost over 15 chapters I didn't know was even published, so I am reveling in the fact I can relax with a glass of wine and read this amazingly and most creatively structured plot. You have a true gift with imagination, and it's adamant in your writing. Most smut I've read is either overly trashy or too shortened and straight to the point, this has the natural balance of sexiness and classy. I'm not sure as to whether the story is complete or unfinished, but know you have something tasty and very addictive in your grasp.

Love from, a very addicted writer herself.
KylaHirawani chapter 10 . 5/8/2014
Honestly I hate Bella! SLUT!
ummm chapter 36 . 12/2/2013
She's pregnant, they've been together for two months and no talk of her getting a period. Plus all her emotional bullshit yup she's forsure prego.
twilighter0398 chapter 36 . 8/21/2013
Update please huhu I'm begging you.
cris chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
every school girls dream ...you really did it justice
Who'sTorchwoodHarryDoctorDraco chapter 36 . 3/18/2013
You must continue this! It would be a sin against Fanfiction to leave this as it is. It's taken me longer than normal to read this story, normally a story of this size takes me 4 to 7 days give or take a few bits of forgotten course work, :P
But I've been savouring this one, and am just so darned depressed that you haven't continued it since I started reading... (because that's a good enough reason to start writing again, :D)
I hope you'll read my message and inspiration for the next few chapters will strike. It's been just under a year since you last updated, but I crazed-fan-girl can hope, :)
Edward . I Love Yuhh chapter 36 . 1/17/2013
Update soon! Im hooked
HiraFrance chapter 36 . 12/2/2012
Guys, I trully did enjoy myself with your fic, with all the shits, the craps and the lemons (my favorites)!
I hope to read you soon!
Love you ;)
HiraFrance chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
More, jeez, I want more of them!
HiraFrance chapter 3 . 12/2/2012
So funny, love it ;)
HiraFrance chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
so will he confess his crush for B?
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