Reviews for Harry Potter: Rise of The Grey Mage
Catten1o2 chapter 10 . 7/12
Hi thanks for this story and i am looking forword to read de reast of the story mvh
MavtheMustang chapter 2 . 5/22
Another unedited, half assed written story that had such great potential. It really is a shame, but only two chapters in and there are far too many spelling and grammatical errors. Get a beta, or take the time to re read your work. Especially when you have characters repeating themselves, or randomly changing their tone and stance on a topic for no reason.
Calmzone1 chapter 10 . 5/10
So, I’m curious if Dumbledore is still going to try to slip a betrothal contract between Ginny and Harry in? He was planning to do it before the end of the summer. He will no longer be his magical guardian as of the 31st though. Hm. And will Penny be able to purge the Horcrux out of Harry? Will Tom’s ritual have made him stronger or not? I would like it to have backfired. Or be dependant upon the magic he is receiving from Harry. :) after all, when they remove the Horcrux, it would create a significant power drop.

Hope you are well during thenpandemic. Stay safe.
Guest chapter 10 . 10/9/2018
When is the next chapter going to come out, great story
Bosma19 chapter 10 . 3/29/2018
Please update
Mistress Saturn1 chapter 10 . 3/7/2018
Has this been abandoned?
staar chapter 10 . 8/22/2017
so good of a read, but man if I had seen that it had not been updated in so long, I would not have started reading to,,..well another good one bits the dust !
Guest chapter 10 . 6/11/2017
When is t
Bronze chapter 3 . 3/15/2017
I have to stop reading this as I can no longer stand to read how an author lets Dumblefutz murder more people because they'll interfere with his plans for the magical world. There are more then enough authors writing those type of stories now.
Bronze chapter 2 . 3/15/2017
It would seem to me that Harry really could shock Dumblefutz by telling him " As I've sat my OWLS I can now kiss your supposed school goodbye. Thus leaving you and the sheeple to fight for yourselves. Your wish to keep me in the dark hereby granted and I'll take ALL my money from this Merlin bedamned country with me as I leave. " Something like that would scare ol' Dumblefutz near to death. He should also Remus to bend and blow. If he wanted to worship at the shrine of the great and mighty Dumblefutz he was more then welcome to. But that means having no contact with him (Harry). Just before leaving he should turn to Dumblefutz and say " There are none so blind as those who will not see. And you old man are the blindest of all. " Talk about scaring him to death. Unfortunately, Dumblefutz would never let his weapon escape him. Therefore, Harry'd have to leave the country without letting ANYONE in the order know when or where he was going. They'd only drag him back to once again become the prisoner of Privet drive or Hogwarts. Dumblefutz would likely put up wards to prevent Harry being able to leave the house as well as do magic so he couldn't leave till someone from the order came to get him. One thing that should be noted about good ol' Dumblefutz is his absolute belief that he can never be wrong. It's like the sign I saw years ago. Rule number 1, The boss is always right. Rule number 2, If the boss is wrong, refer to rule number 1.
Kluseqq chapter 10 . 2/22/2017
abandoned ...
Dogco94 chapter 10 . 10/10/2016
Hope it's not abandoned. Great story
steve.moore.9081323 chapter 10 . 9/29/2016
Nice story
Will there be more
ImTooLazyToLogIn chapter 10 . 4/6/2015
Update soon!

(BTW if you wanna P.M me, i'm ShadeSlayer of Chosen Ones, im just too lazy to login)
Kaya70 chapter 10 . 1/3/2015
Love it please update soon please
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