Amazing story...you surely know how to write a good lemon...its perfect.i'm looking forward to ur other story

One word "HOT"

Awesome one shot! you should totally do more! Just incase I am adding it to story alert! haha

I really liked it. very well done

beautiful, simply beautiful. it was total ichiruki. *bows and applauds and cries a little* bravo!

little tip, you dont need the underscores or hyphens around the quotations. people know when the characters are talking because of the quotations marks.

u get what u ask for rukia :P

i liked it :P

Hey, are you Dark-Skater-Girl from Deviant Art? Because I've just read your story and it's exactly the same with the one I read in DA

I'm KR07 (name in DA) I think I've talked with you before...