This is a beautiful tribute to an endearing character. Some of the lines seem fragmented, but I think that's good, it adds effect.

I also wish they would make a Swordbird category. Maybe if enough people write stories for it?

Anyway, good job.

Wow...and woah. This is a very interesting poem, especially since it's the second Fanfic for Swordbird on the site (the first was done by yours truly).

Very nice, like the rhythem and details. It's very dark, though, which seems to be the opposite of Swordbird. But maybe that just makes it better.

And what's with the parantheses?

Anyway, I like it. I hope more people write Swordbird Fanfics. (And I hope Fanfic would make Swordbird a Fandom.)