iwish u update this soon its been soo long the cliffey is driving me nuts literally

That seems a bit overly dark to me.

I mean, somebody touches his face and he instantly goes nuts and tries to kill anybody nearby? That sucks, a lot.

In canon for him to start forming a cloak at all he's got to be really angry. This just seems to validate his bad reputation.

Chapter 3 was awesome loved it the tsunade point of view was so excellent the whole chapter didnt seem fake. It really was how i think tsunade thinks and her realising her bond with sakura was really awesome.

A cliffie ey?

I like this story :)

Its a sweet but a little drama story.

This is an awesome chapter keep up the good work :)

you're doing great! keep up the great story!

please update this soon i cant wait like half a year before you update again

Wow you didnt dissapoint chapter 2 was amazing i loved it wow the battle was truly brilliant i can picture every sentance story and this story is always going to be in my favourites just wow good luck topping this chapter if its even possible

That's definitely something I've never read before. Stroking his whisker marks automatically releasing the fox. Usually, in fanfic, it's that it puts him in either a super-relaxed or aroused state.

geez, Naruto's gonna be beating himself up about this :(

thanks for posting this chapter ily. Can't wait for the nest one

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Wow this is really amazing your so talented i cant believe how young u are to be writing this well is just amazing and i hope you continue this story im hooked its absolutly amazing

cool story! All the dialog makes it seem real. I liked the ramen flavored cake part.

I like it, I'm glad that she accepted Naruto and saw who he was not what is inside him.

Keep updating when you can, I would love to see more chapters.

Sweet story, you should keep going on with it though akward with the kyuubi talking & it is Kid not Kit common mistake in fanfictions