| Reviews for Not Good |
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   Woman of Letters chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards Review (February 2016): Poor Dean! You did a good job of showing Dean's emotional reaction, his swift action but most of all, how much his own past wickedness still hurts. Using Sam's POV to tell the story worked very well here, as did Dean's economy of action. It's hard to do more in 100 words. It would have been interesting to expand this, mayhbe and see what you could do to work in Dean's reaction to the demon's barb at Sam, given Dean's focus on protecting his brother... |
| BlackIceWitch chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards : February 2016 A good vignette for a period that was ignored. Recognition would bite no matter what form it came in. Succinct, to the point. |
| CoffeeMe chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 Oh wow! I'm hitting random drabbles from all over time/space/genre/etc... 'Think I hit the lottery with this one! |
| Katydid43 chapter 1 . 7/6/2010 Poor Dean! You can just feel his shame in remembering what he'd done in hell. Nicely done! |
| Zatnikatel chapter 1 . 7/4/2010 Oh… I can remember saying on a forum somewhere that I had no problem believing some small part of Dean might have enjoyed what he did down there, even though I think it was more a case of enjoying the fact it wasn’t him on the rack any more. But I dunno… he can be pretty bloodthirsty, and there is that ruthlessness in the way he gives it to the demon. Key being the fact he doesn’t do it until the demon turns on his brother… As always you really make me think hard with just a few words… xxK |
| LEMarauder chapter 1 . 6/23/2010 So much with so little! "...but Sam swore he could feel his brother shrink into himself." Dean has to deal with what he did every single day and I'm sure it's just eating him up right here *sniff* I love all the emotions coursing through each of them, it comes across clearly and beautifully. And the closing line, well, angstification to the max :) Smashing! ~LE |
| sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 6/22/2010 Oh Dean, no! Stop blaming yourself! You're not wicked! And- Oh right, Dean can't hear me from here. Hmmmm... Anyway, I really liked this. Totally sad! |
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Of course he's not wicked; and no matter what he says, he never really was...not really. :( Lots in these few words. Well done. :) |
| supernaturalsammy67 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 OMG! HUN! AWESOME! i loooovvveedd it! :) x |
| Supernoodle chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Ooh, that was angst-tastic. x |
| triquetral chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 OH DEAN! "I was." That acknowledgment is so sad. |
| DeansBabyBird chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Phoebe. Very nice. So many sub-plots in so few words. A delight to read. And the emotion in the last two lines is very well voiced. bev x |
| Edina Clouds chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 very nice use of drabble word PA - can feel the tension! Viv |
| FallenAngel218 chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Such emotion packed into 100 words! Great job! |
| MeAzrael chapter 1 . 6/21/2010 Ohhh - but he IS wicked :-) Sometimes! And didn't he just kill a probably innocent host? Huh? Loved the atmosphere in this one - and the hint that none of our boys is innocent anymore... but that made them grow into what they are now. Thanks so much for sharing Kate |
