This is kind of awesome.

Wow, this is great! I loved that they instantly connected after recovering from Jim 'tackling her' and the dialogue was so natural, great!

Well done!

:D

This was really fantastic! So sweet and cute! LOVE teenage Jim and Pam. xx

I loved this! Great story :-D You should write a sequel.

Your story was so sweet I think you've given me a cavity. That's a compliment btw! I love those moments when I feel I can say to Jim "Don't worry, you'll get the girl in the end." Really well written too, nice work.

This was an adorable story, but man I wish Roy hadn't of shown up and ruined the potential Jam :):)

Aww. What a cute story. Very fun to read. I really enjoyed it. Great job! Just makes me sad that it ended that way. Still, I liked it a lot, and I'm definitely adding it to my favorites. :)

This story was so cute! i loved how you made pam's worst first date into JAM. you write very well, and how jim and pam acted around each other was absolutely perfect.

i very much enjoyed this story:) hope to read another one from you soon!