Wow this was hot, I didn't realize baffled king and idiot hero had smut :D))) I must admit, I didn't completely remember which usuk fic this was until the hallelujah humming, then i realized it was the night they got drunk and kissed and that's why they're in Matthias' bed cause they're at the cabin and everything fell into place lol I'm really hoping I'm right because I didn't check before I wrote this bit and I'm gonna post it without checking... Cause I didn't choose the thug life, thug life chose me lol okay I'm done I'll escort myself out goodbye

Wow and, really, just WOW! Not just sexy but love too? Even if Arthur and Al can't see it, they are the perfect couple. Nicely done. I may black out now but it has been so worth it. XD

LOLYeaaah VirginInexperienced!Alfred ftw! XD I should've slept an hour ago, but damn, I can't take off of my phone once I clicked thiss :3 Hot and cute aaand awww I know this fic is an AU for the other fic, I wished this was included in the main story :{

D'you know that you wrote the best virgin!Alfred ever? Actually I'm not a big fan of first person POV, but you somehow make it sound very smooth and natural. And I like your Arthur and this alternative universe. And did I mention I love your Alfred? He's amazing, Idiot Hero. And he's so hot and natural and his awkward but sincere attempt at seducing Arthur (quite successful, mind you) was so cute. And raw, I like it when they feel raw, I like sex with feelings, and theirs was with oh so many feelings.

Thank you for sharing, it was really hot and romantic and the best virgin!someone I've ever read.

Hmm, so this was when they were drunk? Interesting. I hope Alfred remembered it in the morning. (I don't know how he couldn't. It seemed pretty damn memorable.) Great job, and I will now continue reading Baffed King and Idiot Hero.

P.S. Lmao, I wonder if Mathias ever found out...

Wow...Oh my, that was just lovely .

But at the end all I could think was...Mathias is gonna be so pissed if he finds out they had sex in his bed XD

That.

Was.

Phenomenal.

I honestly can't ask for anything more; you've given me everything I could possibly want in a USUK fanfic. The relationship, the sfx, the hnng factor.

[although I do wish this scene was actually included in the main story, kekeke].

C:

I love you.

asdfghjkl. God that was...wow. I had forgotten I have a kink for first-time fics. I'd love to read that from Alfred's POV, though. :)

awwwwwwww

i read the actual story knowing it's M for a reason. when i finished reading it, i was upset that there was no sex.

now i'm happy and this was beautifully written. oh god i still cant believe king & hero story is over.

YES. I loved this!

Oh god that was Hhooooot. Lol I'm more satisfied with the other story now that i knew they got it on in the end ;P

you're awesomer than Gil because you rule. This was HOT and IC perfect. You really know how to use your language!

Arthur as a strong bottom... Yes, please! Sometimes there just isn't enough of that. : / I just feel awkward while reading about super-uke Arthur crying and so on. He isn't like that in comics/anime! T_T Yeah, I really like keeping them very in-character. Or slighty out of it.

Anyways, you win in and at life in general. I'll keep thinking that they just walked in their sleep back to the bathroom and then the story continued. They're so obvious in "The Baffled King and the Idiot Hero" that I feel like hitting my head against the wall and smack Francis. (Just because :D)

Good job!

HOLLY. SH- ... wow. That was PERFECT. I'm a fond supporter of Arthur being a strong bottom and Alfred being an inexperienced but enthusiastic top, but to this date I'm not sure anyone's really done them justice quite like you have.

Now. You don't know me and I don't know you, but if I did, I'd kneel in front of you and ask you to please, PLEASE, consider writing another one of these, another 'break of the pattern' in the same universe, because words cannot describe how happy you made me.

Ahh, this made me indescribably happy~~~~~ Lovelovelove~~~ Now I'm going to have to go see about this other story of yours... Hehe, I don't know why, but I think my favorite part was "what was that?" "prostate" xDDD Don't ask why I loved that. It doesn't make sense to me either. I only know that I read it over like 15 times because it made me happy. ;;;; I also loved the "do it again"s in italics. Actually, I just really love the way you write. In general. It's really great. Thanks for this~!