Good twist for an end and revealing little bits of what happened throughout the story was a good way to keep up suspense.

u suck 4 makin ed die

I figured that Winry was err crazy or seeing Ed's ghost or something real early but damn... this made me cry two drops of tears D That's awesome! I mean the story. Really, I loved this!

Jac

aww! I'm crying so much right know. good job...!

That's so sad :(

Yeah...kinda figured out Winry was crazy or delusional. Still, it was a nice story.

Wonderful, simply superb love.:D

...Woah. I was...right? Winry is crazy?

And keep writing sad stories please. They usually have more meaning. :) You made me tear up.

Winry is...Winry is what? Dead? Alive? Barely alive? Is Ed dead? Is Winry dreaming? Is she imagining?

Oh wow. I'm really REALLY anticipating the next chapter!

I like this- very much. And I get the feeling I know what's coming... I don't want to say, though, so I don't potentially ruin it if I wind up being right. But I do want to say that I like your characterization of the trio, very nice. Can't wait to see the next chapter!

can't wait to read the next chapter!

Oh.

I have a feeling Ed's gonna' do something stupid.

Update! :D

Panda.

Ack! Update! I wanna see Ed's reaction! :D

Panda.

I like this story a lot so far, and have to say, I can’t wait to read the rest. And maybe if you wouldn’t mind me saying:

At the beginning there seem less descriptive words and it appears choppier to me. In my opinion, the rest of the story has a very nice flow to it and paints a very vivid picture.(:

Till the next chapter then!

I really enjoy reading your stories. You put a lot of effort into them.