Reviews for Of Demons And Saviors |
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LowkeyLowC chapter 6 . 2/16 ... but. It was good though |
zerkses chapter 6 . 5/17/2019 Good job, nice chapter. |
Guest chapter 6 . 5/17/2019 Pretty good keep it up. |
biginferno chapter 6 . 5/15/2019 great story looking forward to reading more please update and complete |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/15/2019 Grammar aside, you use the bashing to rush things, there is no build up for sakura's outburst in the first chapter, neither her argument nor her wish makes sense at all. And nobody attacks you and you think about how hot they are... What the hell. Him defecting... Okay. People can roll with that if you ignore the poor build up leading to that point, but he shouldn't be interested in someone who was just trying to kill him just yet, maybe once they are out of the village or went through something together that actually forces them to take a second look. This ship is full of holes and they are too easy to see. |
XenoLucifer chapter 6 . 5/15/2019 This chapter was disappointing, would've been better if Sakura had thrown the kunai at Tayuya and after that Naruto snapped and decided to renounce their friendship and beat her, not the kyuubi or Yami Naruto, but Naruto, do you know why? because character development. If you have Naruto black out everytime he does something bad then what's the point. |
Chimotofu chapter 5 . 7/15/2018 Please continue to update I think this is a really good read. Lucky on the next chapter! |
ByUzumaky3000 chapter 5 . 1/20/2018 Me gusta y espero que la actualices |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/28/2017 Please update and focus more on this out of anything. It is really good |
guest chapter 5 . 7/17/2017 update soon |
N7 Greek-Valkyrie chapter 5 . 7/10/2017 Oh someone fucked up. If that someone is the pinky, I hope ah gets hurt badly. |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 Good update. As for the other story, I'd rather you focus on getting this one done first. |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 Great story please update soon! |
kingnarutoxqueenkushina chapter 5 . 7/9/2017 Yes we need more |
draven32 chapter 5 . 7/8/2017 He'll yeah I'd like another NarutoxTayuya story |