been close to 6 1/2 years since last update, guess theres no chance of updates anymore. Really Good Story tho, lets hope for the author continue writing it... tho i think its best if somebody else continues it.

Please continue

Really love this story! Hope you update it sometime.

Ok. Luna totally fucking suprised me right now. I know about personaliti and inteligent but siriusly that was...WOW

Luna sauntering inn and declairing herself his mistress fits perfectly with the story. Lol

Rose did the exact same thing, no matter how much I wanted to say no. Although Luna is far nicer.

Keep up the good...evil...work~

I don't typically enjoy Dark! Harry fics, but this one certainly has potential and I look forward to reading it in it's entirety.

Sham you stopped writing this story

It's the one thing I love about Harry Potter; He's so moldable!

And people can call him a good guy all they want, he's never done anything but trying to survive and placate his friends. At best he's neutral.

(Tho the way he was raised makes me think he is 100% amoral. That's what he has mione for, she's his moral compass. Ron is so obviously over the top predjudiced that it's hard for anyone to take him serious.)

It's looking promising thus far. Kudos for keeping true to the game and Gnarl!

This is an impressively well written crossover. I find very few crossovers with Overlord that have the actual feel of the characters. I do hope that you end up returning to this at some point.

Wow... Luna is EXACTLY like your first mistress. She decides she wanna live with you, command you around, gives you no choice at all, and in the end, you just sit there confused and wonder how the hell that happened.

I am looking forward to see gow you intend to turn Harry Evil. I imagine you have some brilliant manipulations in store! *Grins widely* Too bad they didn't find him as a child and raised him... the look on people's face when he showed up in Hogwarts and undoubtly would sort into Slythering and proboably make hufflepuff his loyal minnions since they reminded him of home would be priceless! *Chuckles*

I really like this approach of not having him jump head first into evil and having gnarl actually work some manipulation.

Seducing him with the promise of the power to defeat voldemort without having to do anything evil. very nice.

How is harry younger than usual? they usually recruit young children and harry is almost 18 as per earlier statement that he is on his last year of hogwarts

Getting better, though some of it still feels slow

The blues would need something that can go into water and on land, so maybe giant frogs?
The blacks could temporarily possess an animal to get around faster and they can leave it at will with the animal being corrupted to still help/serve harry