I can't be the only one who see Dean Winchester right I mean fire blond hair

So all those chapters about Danny fighting himself and feeling bad about betraying Jazz were made meaningless by that ending. It completely undercut the drama of the story. I sincerely regret the time I spent reading it.

Hahaha. I wonder how mad Vlad is because he missed out on having the Star be his "daughter" hahaha. Serves you right you horrible person! Hehe. I know who set the ghost sense off! I know I know! Hahahhaahahahahahhaahhahahah.
Knowledge has apparently made me insane .

I know I know! Tee hee. Or...you could have totally changed it and now I don't know...the evilness of this cliffy would suggest you are very cunning that way ;)

The numbering of this chapter throws me off, but that is the only complaint I could ever have with this! So now we know who John is, but do we really know? Nope!

Pshhhh, do not lie, wfea! We DO know who John is, we simply do not know we know, you know? Tee hee

Did Danny just give Patty a look? He totally did didn't he? Oh it's so awesome to reread this and know what's going to happen. Gives a whole new perspective! I still say Danny should be able to piece the fact that jazz looks like jazz and lives with Patty, his former foster parent, together. I suppose he was too young but still!

And so it beins! The capture and the star become hesitant acquaintances and it rolls out from there! It's interesting to see how early Johnny played a part in the story, I nearly forgot about him!

And so the trio is complete...yes I remember how mean you were with those cliffies, and those dang ellipses... Cursed ellipses...
See the irony there?

I have a question (that can be answered to cheesy cheese lover. They're a friend of mine) anyway why didn't jazz notice Vlad? Did she forget him in the 10 years?

Just wanted to share that I'm rereading this! Cuz I haven't in a few years and I miss it .

Oh my freak'n gosh this is one of the best fan fics I've ever read! I caught one mistake in a 31 chapter story! Are you sure you don't have any published books out? This story has the best wrap up I've ever seen. Thks for writing! Write the extras, although this story ended perfectly. Write more soon!

Just one thing. The sentece where Sam says "Let me guess...you could live out of your room, couldn't you?" doesn't make sence. Other than that, it's awesome.

This was sooooooo awesome! I usually hate reading at my computer (which is why I won't read the extra scenes right now; I really need a break of reading ) but I wanted to know what happens next so badly, so I'm sitting here, starring at the screen for...many hours now ;)

As I said, I'll read the extra scenes later and it would be totally awesome if you would write those sequels ;)

OMG please do a sequel! I swear, if you just leave it there... well, let's just say that you better not. Oh, and please PM me if you do!