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AbandonedPlay chapter 14 . 8/15
Yay to gandalf staff
OcheanMyth chapter 14 . 8/8
GANDALF STAFFF!
Sakuragane San chapter 14 . 5/27
So, Gandalf staff, yay.
Though this is a bit shorter compared to some others that I have read recently, it is very nice, and sweet. John/Harry's worry over possibly being discovered as Harry Potter makes it feel real and relatable. Everyone drawing their own conclusions that John is Tom's son, including Tom himself, is very amusing. Wouldn't he remember what *excursions* he took part in that many years ago, or were there too many to count-?
I'm really glad that John found Alice to take him in; she is wonderful and good for John.
Exited reader chapter 14 . 4/29
I’m a big fan of this story! It’s very unique compared to a lot of other fanfictions that I’ve read, I really hope to see more chapters if possible! Also I think the staff would be a great idea, like a cane to match the top hat haha
MangaVampire chapter 14 . 4/27
Gandalf staff!
Timey Wimey Detecter chapter 14 . 4/27
Oh my gosh, i love this story it's so funny. Can't wait to see what happens next
Rain Shigu chapter 14 . 2/25
Gandalf!
Percy's Dongos chapter 14 . 2/4
Yay! Definitely Yay!
lara.niric chapter 14 . 2/2
Gandalf staff yay all the way.
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 14 . 1/4
While I agree that Lucius IS quite luscious, merging it with his name is a little... *Laughs*
houquilter chapter 14 . 12/5/2019
Yes please! Make the Gandalf staff! This is so much fun, I'm glad you decided to continue it.
Runa Ollivander chapter 14 . 11/19/2019
Yay to the Gandalf staff!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/19/2019
Yay.

A staff sounds great. I like a focus a ring or and claw thing to put on John’s finger better. Helps him focus his magic more and he can use it and his wand at the same time. People would assume the ring was just jewelry and think he’s only using his wand.

But a staff is works too.
winterqween chapter 14 . 11/16/2019
YES!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/15/2019
Yay
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