It's been years since you uploaded this, but I fucking love your writing style, your jokes and wit. I also love the way you incorporated the whole smoking thing into this. I know it's bad to smoke and all, but I definitely could identify with Yami here. Thank you so much for this fic. It really is the best thing I have read here.

Soo, are you still continuing this coz I'm totally waiting Seme!Yugi to fuck Yami/Atem senseless.

Oh my this is a great story is 25 Yugi's actually age
Update as soon as you can

This story is brilliant, love the role swap! Please, do more? I know it's been years but... It's too awesome to let go!

Kitsune:I LOVE DIS!
Kansei: If you love it so much when are you going to write a story?
Kitsune: *fluffs out tail* shut-up!

Omg, I died! This is way too funny! I liked how you switched up the roles :) I don't know how I feel about Yami being on the bottom though ;)

This is really precious. I love it. I don't know what else to say, expect that I would be happy if this was continued one day.

COOOL XD

WHENS THE NEXT UPDATE! oh god this fic is soooooooo good! like OMFG please update! i seriously love that Yami got an allergic reaction and had to go to the hospital! i wasnt expecting that at all!

Gosh, please... come back to and update this story... please please. At the beginning I thought I would hate it, because I don't like Yuugi being seme and Yami being uke, but somehow ... during the course of the chapters I started to get used to it and actually like it. Please please update ... it makes me so sad to know that all the good ff-writers are going to get old and lose interest in writing or the fandom or whatever. But this story is great, it has still alot of potential and you ... you don't want to throw this away, nooo ... please come back and update! T_T

yours desperate reader AkuZeku

Here's hoping for an update are did this die due to a lack of interest. Pity, if that is the case. It's actually a pretty good AU.

Please update soon! x3 I wanna see a seme yugi soon~ Seme Yugi is just so hard-to-get sometimes on this site x3

Nooo! You can't just leave me hanging! *attempts to shake you through internet* *only succeeds in making monitor turn funny colours* T.T (Okay, the other readers, too, but I'm a selfish bastard when it comes to updates.)

Is it back to the bookstore like usual? And is Yami going to go into a self-doubt-induced (mini) panic attack if left to stew in his own juices for a week or two?

brittney

'If I die, know that you suck.' Best. Line. EVER! This story is hilarious, and I love how you wrote Yami's character. It's nice to see him flustered and self conscious for once, since he's usually the one oozing confidence in these types of fics. Needless to say, Yuugi's character was also superb.

I know it's been a couple months, but can I still plead for an update? I'll give you cookies!

Hehehe... This is absolute GENIOUS! It's like an actual novel! I'm serious, if you weren't going to be sued for copywriting the characters you could publish it once it's finished. It's very amusing, and Yami? Well, he's definately not the typical "girl" in the story, which is quite nice. Usually the character being pursued (Yami being pursued by Yuugi in this story) is either ALL inner romantic or ALL cynic/inner cynic. To have them BOTH in his head is awesome and funny when his "inners" get into fights. XD Hehe. Please continue! Update! Update!