Reviews for Racing Against Reality |
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In The Forest chapter 1 . 7/16/2014 I don't know how to start this review honestly. I'm on and off with reviewing so I'm not that good at it. Here Goes: There has been a lot of stories that make me laugh until I tear up or make me wish to go to a corner to cry my eyes out. This did neither. In a way, it was both better and worse than my second option. I am one of those people who looked around at other FF writers' profiles, trying to find silly things to put on my own. One day I happened on a, I guess mini story that was pretty much the same as this: The nameless boyfriend was leaving and wrote the girl two notes, both left in her pocket. She read the note first and fussed about it for a while before the translation fell out. She became happy before she saw a newscast on the t.v. about the plane here boyfriend was suppose to be on ans soon committed suicide. The boyfriend left a message on the phone. What I am getting at I guess is that when I read it, my heart wrenched and when I read your story, it wrenched again but at a more worse way. I just wanted to comment on the similarities cause no one has I think, but if they did, then sorry to make you read it again. Basically: Thank you for building off that post, whether it was meant to or not, because the story was beautiful to me. |
AmethystScientist chapter 1 . 10/22/2011 AAww, So Sad, but so Heartwarming! 8') |
threatmantic chapter 1 . 12/20/2010 I LOVE IT! I have read this so many times and every read I end up in tears! It's beautiful! Mikan loved natsume so much that she couldn't bear to live without him! I wish you would write natsumes reaction to her suicide! Please keep on writing. And I'm terribly sorry for my first reveiw on Crashing Funreals because I was just in a bad mood that day an saw that you had relatively the same plot and didn't credit her so I jumped to conclusions; peope steal plots a lot now a days. Keep on writing |
xMelodiix chapter 1 . 10/12/2010 Awwwww. Mikan suicided? :'( Well, at least Natsume didn't die as well! Anwyays, good job, as usual xD |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 THIS IS LIKE ROMEO AND JULIET! T-T |
Aoi Kitsukawa chapter 1 . 7/2/2010 So funny! I like this story! by the way, is Mikan commit suicide? You didn't tell us what's her fate in the end. Nice story! |
marshimell0akira chapter 1 . 7/2/2010 Wahh! T*T Poor Mikan! Poor Natsume! Great story though...Even if it is depressing in a way! |