Reviews for Closure
Angervo chapter 16 . 10/4/2014
This story was absolutely brilliant! As haveunotthought put it, I would definitely go and buy the book! You have very nicely found answers to many of those questions that bothered me after watching the A2A finale (although it was very, very good): how could Alex simply move on and leave Gene behind, how will Gene ever be able to enter the pub and what will happen to his kingdom if he does, who killed him and how is Molly able to cope with her mothers death? If they ever decide to make a movie or a special episode about A2A, they should use this fanfic as a script!
theHuntgoeson chapter 16 . 9/4/2010
I have just read this whole story at one sitting and it is absolutely wonderful! I am in awe of the way you have interwoven the different times and storylines to make such a superbly satisfying whole. The detective work to identify Gene and his killer in the present day is brilliantly done, and I love the linking-in to Molly, slowly coming to terms with her mother's death, and the bewildered DI Collins. I have to admit that I guessed that Chris would be the young copper on Henderson's conscience, but I didn't expect the twist of Henderson coming to 1983 to replace Gene and bring the messages from 2008. That is so clever. And how wonderful to have the Manchester and London teams united with Litton to intercept the Brinks-Mat robbery. I adore this fic! Please write more A2A stories when you can.
haveunotthought chapter 16 . 7/30/2010
This was a work of art; I read it all in one go and I would go out and buy the book! Very clever to twist all three story lines into one conclusion and keep everyone in character. My real shock was how the other young copper shot was Chris Skelton and that makes Henderson so suitable for the geneverse.

Spotted the Dempsey and Makepeace lines!

Molly throwing in her note and saying ashes to ashes was quite brilliant

A very special story, so glad I found it
sash queen of the jungle chapter 16 . 7/26/2010
At least they got their happy ever after ending. Are u going to write anymore ashes to ashes stories? Just one question that only alex can answer does gene have the libido of a 19 year old? Thanks for writing and sharing.
queenoftherandomoneandonly chapter 5 . 7/25/2010
I like this rather a lot. When I really like stuff I find them hard to review. IT'S AWESOME YAY! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
MinxySix chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
Just read this all in one go! I love how you structured this, with all the different strands of the story winding together- it was incredibly well written and formed! Also, this particular line made me laugh a lot, it's so unbelievably perfect! xD

"I now have in my department two fruitcake DIs who talk nonstop psycho-bollocks, a DI who thinks he's Manchester's answer to Valentino, an Essex girl who thinks the sun shines out of Lewis Collins's arse and a DC who wouldn't look out of place with George, Zippy and Bungle."

Thanks for this fic! :)
80's Babe chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
Wow I loved this story. It's really moving.

This is the ending to Ashes that i would have liked to see and I'm sure many others will agree with me. You are a very talented writer and have captured the characters perfectly.

Can't wait to read more from you.
EightEminus chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
This was good and I think you did the right thing in leaving it there and allowing us to imagine for ourselves what happens next. I look forward to your next fic!
Elliewelly1 chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
ohmegod, i loved this, twas an amazing last chapter:D and i loved the lickle Galex that you put in:] especially at the end hehe, it's so in character haha!

This was amazing, i'm so glad you posted it! Ang i'm glad Gene finally got the ending he deserved!
theoofoof chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
This was fantastic. Can't believe it's over. I'm so glad Gene got to find peace and everyone can be together for eternity. I like happy endings. Thank you so much for sharing this story. It's been a really enjoyable and engaging read.
Jazzola chapter 16 . 7/25/2010
Oh wow... I love it! Great ending, really tied things up. Nice work! :)

Thanks so much for this fic! You rock!

Jazzola :)
Jazzola chapter 15 . 7/23/2010
Ow wow... where did that come from? Amazing writing, and drama drama drama!

Loved it! Thanks for posting!

Jazzola :)
sash queen of the jungle chapter 15 . 7/23/2010
Thanks for another great chapter.
theoofoof chapter 15 . 7/23/2010
Oooooooh. Wonder if he'll end up in the Geneverse? Then he can tall Alex and Gene about what happened and reassuer them that Molly is okay!

Can't wait for the next chapter (even though I don't want it cos it will mean this fab story is over!)
alphawhiskey chapter 14 . 7/22/2010
Excellent story - thanks so much! x x
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