5/5 It's a very interesting view of their relationship. The only negative point I have, it's it could have been anyone and not only Draco, but your view on the affair was very well written. The flow is very good and Hermione's thoughts sound right and natural. I loved how her mind evolves until that bitter ending. I love the strength you gave her, yet the weakness of her mind. I think you made a wonderful portrait of what could have passed in her mind. You don't excuse them, you don't pity them nor blame them, and you managed that very well. Amazing job!

Thank you for taking part in the Comp and answering all the challenges! I'm glad you loved the Comp, I sure loved reading your entries :)

5/5 I really love your story. Hermione's POV is very well written and the dynamics between the characters are great. Your Ron is fantastic (even if infuriating...) It feels very natural and it's easy to read. The flow is great. Also, I love that you have a closure with the mentioning of Ginny. It opens the story but close your fic well. Very well done! I loved it!

Do I sense some Ginny-jealousy in the ending? *winks* Rather than that this was fantastic, well written and in character for both Hermione and Ron. Even though it's first person it could be something that would've easily happened in canon. Well done!

I really like this story. Ron is so annoying here, you have to hate him just a little. P

My favourite part is the last sentence. Ginny, the manipulator! D

4/5 It's a very interesting prompt, I loved it at the moment I read it. Your story is well built, and I really like Blaise POV. I can't connect really the first part of the prompt to the story, but I understand that in the way you write Blaise, it just couldn't be otherwise. I really like the dynamic between the characters and how you settled everything. The first three paragraphs are a little long but necessary. The beginning of the fic really sounds like an exposed, it's a little weird. But I adore the ending scene. You did a great job! I loved it!

Aw - poor Blaise. I think all your characters are very IC for canon. You did a marvellous job with that. It suits the lyrics perfectly. I really do feel sorry for Blaise. Still, this was marvellously written. Well done!

I'm not an avid fan of RonHermione, but you've accomplished them wonderfully.

Your Hermione is just spot on, and, really, I'm positively envious that you've managed her so well. Really, it's uncanny.

The whole Fred interaction was unexpected, but very lovely in the way that kind of rips your heart out, you know?

And, gosh, the way you've incorporated the prompts is just so natural and smooth, and I wish everyone did it the way you did.

The ending was especially nice, too. It lifts us up at the end, and even though you've portrayed the sadness of Fred's death, you still managed to remind me of him in a way that makes me grin.

And I wish I could give you some concrit, but I really have nothing constructive to say.

Superextrawonderful job.

:D

4/5 It's a very interesting take at Hannah. I've never read anything like that before and it's a good change. You managed to justify it. The flow of the fic is a little weird and hesitant, like you want to say a lot in a limited number of sentences. But I do like the awkward interaction between the two of them, and the re-meeting. Also, I like how you suggest that they have matured but are similar. They have changed, except that they are still the sames. It's a good and original fic.

You know something, this story was really sweet. Hermione at Fred's grave talking about Ron. Really wonderful plot. You know I don't usually like reading stories about main characters (specifically the Golden Trio) but i love this. I really do. I suppose you want something more descriptive than that, but I really can't find anything bad to say about your story :)

That was excellent. Your characterisation of Hannah was original, and very interesting. I loved your portrayal of Neville too, because you caught the teenage boy perfectly, and the young man shown was a believable progression. The story was enjoyable, and the last line was special - it gave the plot a kind of... balance between hope and loss. Great job! Ravenclaw is the best.

I really liked this, and it was a fresh, different way of showing lily and james' relationship. I've read a lot of L/J stories, but this was different and was very well written, and the prompt was used well. The SpaG was good and the flow of the story was nice, which made it really sweet to read. The only problem I had with it was the "quite alright" which I thought was a bit fake and didn't fit right. You got 5/5 for this round, well done!

5/5 You did a very clever and beautiful use of the prompts. All the symbolism you added to the prompts is fantastic and brilliant! I adore your story and how she addresses herself to Fred, it's powerful and tragic. The flow is very natural and pleasant and the ending is just beautiful, the wind blowing toward the burrows, just so beautiful. You have an amazing fic, great job!

I don't usually read about Percy, though I'll admit to having a bit of a soft spot for him.

Really, I have no complaints about this.

All the technical aspects are flawless. The flow is wonderfully smooth. And ohemgee I adore your characterization. Especially of Penelope. Like, you have no idea.

The whole concept was also /very/ cute, but I can't help but thinking it's a little bittersweet, too, because it seems towards the end of their relationship.

Oh, and I must confess, I lol'd a bit a Percy's awkwardness. Yeah.

Fabulous job. :DDD

Awww! I loved this little one-shot. if I were a judge you would've gotten full points for this - but I'm not, so I hope the real judges see sense and give you the full marks. Great job!

The prompt blends in with the story very well!

Great job!

All the best!