Very hot

I think it was very well written. No stopping you from making more. P

Oooh!

Very good!

I think was well written, and had a good plot

the people weren't majorly OCC, and the general idea is very good!

(P.s. though, in your end note you say viola, viola is an instrument like a violin, voilà is what you meant)

Very Good!

I am going to honestly suggest that you remove this fanfic from here and post this on a site that does allow MA rating. No, I didn't read the fanfic, but there are clues that this is likely such. The fact this is a three some, the fact that you say "definetely a M rating...or even more." And the fact that you said, "if you aren't over 18...stop reading now." If you read the ratings for this site, M is 16, while MA, which is not allowed is for older people. You're also afraid of being banned if someone reports this. Simply put, better off safe then sorry in the long run, right?

all for smut w/love involved (not so much w/the non-love just sex lemons), & have requested hime 3somes (her x 2 other males) in reviews at least 10 times by now. my only complaint is the raw language. takes away some of the romance-like lemons w/euphemisms a lot better (core, heat, center, sheath, shaft, sword...). just my preference. do like they are so in love, & emotionally support each other in their long-term relationship & of course that she has become spunkier w/the support of her men.

every threesome fanfic i read, in general, is either both men loving the girl but not each other, or the other way around. i LOVE how all three love each other. and this Bleach threesome was great, love how hime turned badass

You're Sado is a beast...I love it

kida ooc dont you think? but then again we change as we get older so idk great tho she should be spoiled shes so cute and they totally would make her come out of her shell chad is so hot in this one great job!

hiya!

i do believe i read and reviewed your other awesome threesome between sakura, kiba and shino.

this one is just as good!

whoo, hot. :D

and really well written.

only saw one mistake. you called uryu's eyes brown in there. just in case you wanna know. :D

keep up the excellent work!

-callie

hmmms... threesomes welcomed but- did you HAVE to bring HER into it? sigh, it was awsom tho! thumbs up!

Hi. I'm a huge fan of Bleach fanfics, and I think your story was great. However, (this is where I put in a bit of constructive criticism), you didn't really use many themes from the manga. I'm not saying it's bad, cuz it's not, so please don't take offence at my words and not write anymore. That being said, you're story was extremely hot and made me wish I was Orihime!

Excuse me but could you please change the pairing setting to chad/uryu so those who hate yaoi and love uryu/orihime wont continue to run into this on the list and become really tempted to flame you for this.

Hello! I read very little Bleach, but I will tell you that this was good :) Ahhh, I feel so pervy reading this stuff, but I'm actually trying to get better at lemons myself sooo...yup, let's just call this research haha. Anyway, I've never read these three together, and I really liked it-especially that quiet Sado is so dominant O.o Oh my! Anyway, great job, luv!

-chewingonpearls (SAYURI)

you know.. i didnt like uryuu that much before rofl

who doenst love a thressome with bi ppl *-*

i still think u should be a writer!

great scenes! i just asked myself.. where the inspiration is coming from? haha ;D

shuuhei for crying out loud.. he is my fav character in bleach.. my 2nd one in the list of male hotness.. and he is with renji *-* the 4th one!

god you know how to write!

keep writing! love u! bye o/

wow! this was awesome :) love dirty talking Sado ;) yummy

xxx