Please please please update! I’m in love with this story...

L. Hands down, no hesitation.

I just got to the end of what you've written so far, and I think you've done a great job with it all. I was saddened to realize when I went to go to the next chapter there was none, and I hope you might continue it one day. I'm so curious what you had planned for everyone, and I would have loved to get to hear more of Ray's back story. Hope you have a great day and thank you for the read!

You know I haven't been on this site for five or six years but I remembered this story and you know what, I still love it after re-reading it. I understand that it's been five years since you updated but my heart wouldn't settle waiting for the next chapter.

With respect and well wishesJac

Awesome story, I really love it! Ray is a deep character and I really enjoy how you portray Light and L. I would prefer if Ray ended up with L, tho... If you continue your story, that is. Either way, your doing a grate job! Thank you for your work!

L ALL THE WAY

I really like this story and didn't come across any continuity/editing issues besides L saying hed help Rayne study in chapter 4 and that never happening/being referenced. But I understand if you don't want to continue it even if its really good lives more important best of luck with what your doing ill be sure to follow this in case you do decide to keep going.

Personally, I think light and our girl has more chemistry than her and L, at the moment. I really like the moments between light and Ray. And I get that trying to get those with L is like walking a tightrope, and it’s so easy to make him OOC, considering his character. I don’t mind having both (really, it’s like having cake and being able to eat it) and I came out of my dark and quiet corner to tell you that I like your story( it’s so well written! *Squeeee* Ahem, I ment to say that I enjoy what you envision this turning into) and hopefully to provide some love to get your creativity going. I’ll wait though, I can be patient for a GOOD DN story like this one ;)
-Dog

I have really enjoyed the story so far and want to thank you for work. I just wanted to know when you will update next. Also I have a few questions.
1. Do you actually bake in real life?
2. What is Rayne's favorite cake?
3. Who do you like better L or Light?
is your favorite character in Death Note
5. Do you find Ryuk funny
Lots of gratitude
Raina

Oh, hell. I did not see that coming. Jesus. -falls to knees-

I also see you haven't updated in years. This is a good story! You should keep at it if you ever have the time again!

hii, i really like your story. ive read this story countless of times and i still couldnt get enough of it and i dont think i ever will. theres so much stuffs i can write about why i like this. like your grammar is good and the words you use really got me googling it. and i just really really like it. although its kind of sad that you stopped writing it but i think i can understand why. whats worse is that readers start rushing a chapter out just because they want it. its not like the authors are getting paid for doing it. but worry not because once you continued it, i would be the first to come and check it out. i see from your profile that youve fell in love with our boys(bts) although im not sure when u did but still welcome to the fandom! im happy to find a someone so cool and mature that loves them 3 instead of of immature brats.(no offence(?hope you have a good day. (dont even know if you'll e reading this or not hahahah)

this really annoyed me. I don't particularly like reading a story where the oc always falls short

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I really loved it~
Sato is so adorable xD Why am I liking him more than the canon characters?

I Loved it