Ah, I came here before to read this story but i see that you have edited the version. This is very good and to tell you I am not such a big LinkxRuto fan but With your story you may just change my mind, Keep on typing LxR!

from Hyrule's Prince

~Rikku

Glad to see this is indeed a LinkxRuto fanfic. I guess the first chapter is OK. I guess the only part I'm not too thilled about is having Link say this is the last time he is leaving the forest and never is coming back. Personally, I think he should at least visit his friends there once in a while, even if he does not go there often, just a suggestion or maybe there should be a reason to back this up.

Also there got to be other reasons Link loves Ruto beside being engaged to her, maybe a flashback or two could help put light to this subject.

Did see your review to one of my Zelda fanfics. Not sure when I will ever write more fanfics or continue any other ones. If you have ANY suggestions on my fanfics or whatever, let me know by PM or something. If you want, I can share my ideas I have on some fanfics by PM if you want me to.

Well, I hope to see the next update to this fanfic. Also I suggest for editting this fanfic, add Ruto as the 2nd character.

You might want to watch the quality of the writing. Every time someone else is speaking, you have to double space. That's just an example of what you might want to try to help your story along. :-)

I don't know much about LinkxRuto, so I have no comment on the plot.