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It was okay for your first one. I like it. Good job.

There were a couple grammar mistakes here and there, but I'm pretty sure you wouldn't care. Otherwise, it's a great fan fiction. Keep up the great work.

Hi again shdows! It's me again,just thought that i'd drop by. I've read this story more times than I remember, and each time it just keeps on getting beter. By the way,your lemons are awesome,and I think if you got phantom hourglass you'd come up with more stories. Damn,I can't tell you anything,but I want to so badly. Sigh...oh well,I'll just have to suck it up for now. If you ever played spirit tracks, you'll be in for a surprise when you hear his 's weird as fuuuuuuuuuckkkkk,I tell as hell...in my opinion anyway...

This lemon was great! It's the first lemon I've read. Then again,i'ts the first lemon I've ever read for that matter. So, will this lead to another fic in wich this kid is born? I if that's what it leads to,you should have tetra have the baby on the ship while link is with her in tetra's quarters disscussing stuff. I think that'd make it more interesting. Then,link will have to mann the ship to outset to get tetra to the Outset hospital. That would be...AWESOME!

Aaahh... I never get tired of rereading your stories :)

AHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD! LOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! FROM BEGINNING TILL END IT WAS PERFECT! lol I'm giggling still like a child that first heard the word 'penis'! Keep doing what you do best XD

I know its been four years sicne you wrote this but if u do read this comment I thought it was really cool and you need to make a seaqual about their child.

wow the end man the end just so ya know im pregnant with your kid . :O HOLY S*)SINCE WHEN DID I F&()YOUR A& WITH MY D*(#$? you were to drunk to remember ... . . uh huh or did you rape me in my sleep?! . no... . how drunk was I? lets say drunk enough to kill a entire crew 3 times over. . damn im a good drinker (facepalm)

Hey man I like your idea of a hidden erotic romance between the two characters, but alcohol makes it less romantic, so I suggest next time you don't use the idea of alcohol. But overall I like it!

This is a pretty fucking amazing fic. I'd fap to it!

No more bad words, you know children and teens reading this.

i say what is with all the rape and the gay guys and link not doing a barel roll

What is wrong with the world today now there are actually good telink lemons this is awesome thanx

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