This was wonderful! You actually managed to catch all of the pain and suffering from that episode, all of the heartbreak and betrayal and trust severed...in 100 words! Absolutely amazing!

~ Trina ~

And darn good to. The hardest words to say sometimes and yet the easiest way to heal.

Granddaughter is getting way to big to fast. Almost 4.

Very tender and poignant! I especially love, "Reads the mark of pain he's wrought. Lets touch say what his voice cannot.

"I'm sorry.""

Nicely Done! :-)

Beautiful!

this is VERY nice Shannz - welcome to drabbledom

Viv

Nice. I liked the flow, the cadence of your words. Thanks.

Very nice! Congrats on your 1st drabble! I'm so proud of you! I knew you could do it. Gives you a different sense of accomplishment, doesn't it?

And with only 100 words, it's easy to finish and easy to post. lol. Well, maybe not so easy to finish. I'm getting better with judging length but over all it is a fun ride to know I can truly say something worthwhile in just 100 words.

I'm so happy for you. Can't wait for more, right? -nudge, nudge, wink, wink -

~Ari :D

Wow! Welcome to the challenge (says the other newbie :-) - and what a wonderful drabble. It fits perfectly to the very intense and sad episode, and I loved your choice of words (even if it was a bit too much skin to skin for me :-) I think Dean wouldn't have reacted well to that back then. But it's certainly what Sam would've wanted to do...

xxx

Kate

Lovely - so well constructed with a poetic rhythm and careful choice of words. It works so well conveying the painful emotions they never really explored in the show...

Lovely drabble. I liked the pace and flow of the words as well as the sentiment expressed. Welcome to the community.

DeansBabyBird. x

You're a master of hurt/comfort fics, regardless of the fandom. You captured Sam and Dean's hurt perfectly here, and you worked the challenge word in with finesse. Well done!

Oh, this was a nice tag to that episode. I loved how Sam put his hand over Dean's heart in a silent messege.