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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi everyone, I’m trying to get access to my old account so I can update this story Will keep you posted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story hope the next chapter comes out soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update and make more chapters to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love It! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter! UPDATE SOON! GOOD LUCK!:D |
![]() ![]() omg love plz continue or let someone adopt... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a very good story and i am glad that Dem. and Bella are friends and she calls Jane a sister like and looked at Alice,well she deserved it going without saying good bye or see you soon just left not good now Edward knows the truth that they are not true soul mates,hopefully he can just be friends with her and yes what is up with Tanya. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what Jasper and Edward and the family are hiding or is it just them and Edward has no say on anything that Izzy has to say anymore this is just getting more interesting to say i am in my seat ready to jump that how good this story is |
![]() ![]() ![]() well this was a good chapter what did they do bring Tanya to try to make Bella jealous it won't work considering she knows that Edward and her aren't soul mates and if he doesn't believe it they can tell Edward to phone the Volturri and ask for Marcus he will tell them what he saw. This is getting more interesting so i guess Dem. and Izzy isn't soul mates other wise they would feel the electricty flow through them right or something like that so i wonder who Izzy's soul mate is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow i don't know what Alice expected of Izzy,and trying to make up to her she doesn't want that in her life she has a new family now and wait until the Cullen's find out that the kings know about her and find out the Demetri is on the guard of the is going to be good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my goodness really why the heck did they even come back after what Edward said to Bella in the forest and breaking up with her she doesn't need to go through that again not the pain or anything like that wait until they find out that the Voturri knows about Bella and gave her a choice and for her to find her soul mate before she gets changed by the Volturri or probably Demetri,yep this is just going to be great and that Bella found out the Edward isn't for fact Bella's soul mate now she can tell him to his face and to bug off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow so Demetri is with Bella this is cool and he even went to senior school with her and he is how old yea,they didn't expect to see the Cullen's back in Forks now did they cause he did leave Bella in the first place, i don't blame Bella for not turning around to talk to them when they expected her to this is there must care for Bella a lot considering he said code red that meant vampires,but Bella calmed him down a bit this is good they seem to make a better couple then Edward and Bella would at least Demetri isn't controlling or anything like that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it plz update |
![]() ![]() ![]() im so twisted in the head i actually enjoyed that Edward isnt like by right? XD! LOLZ~ Read my story will ya? AlicexFelix and DemetrixOC XD! LOLZ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please! I'm BEGGING you! to please update soon DX I really want to know what happens between izzy and dem 3 you did a really good job of previous chapters and I love how you changed Bella and made izzy! LOVE IT! XD please update soon :) xxxxoooo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked the story, though I think Bella/Izzy could've kept her hair color...oh well, you're the author! Hope you'll update soon. . |