I’m sorry but Temari running away completely ruins this story and makes no sense at all, this feels like a complete angst fest with absolutely no real plot.

This is a good story just wished it was finished out

It's a great story but where is the epilogue

This is AMAZING! I need more!

you keep writing this shit is amazing

welp, I was wrong D:

No it was kakashi im betting it or Lee ;D Jk it was sasgay

Continue these please

Nice fic

Very good few spelling mistakes but I have a lot to but I like it good job buddy Keep up the good work

When I first started reading this, I didn't think Temari and Naruto could be a couple. You have proved me wrong with this and I just want to tell you I greatly enjoy reading this and I hope you update soon. P. S. I absolutely love Sakura and Sasuke bashing because they honestly deserved it to all they did to him through the years.

As much as i wanted naruto to kick his ass i like this too Anko and ibiki will have a 'Nice Little chit chat' with them as much as i want them killed sadly they can not lose they're "Precious" Uchiha.

i will let you know as far as i know Sasuke will be tortured or my name isn't .Wilson
anyone who stands in the way of sasuke Tortured will die or pay for it.

Sadly his punishment didn't happen but surely enough that black emo bastard will pay for hurting naruto-san and temari i hope you kill him.

hehehehehe the pink haired bitch deserved what she got as for sasukes punishment i'll be seeing the next chapter for that. -evil laughter- :3