Please finish this story! It's soooo good!

was his Sisters hit too

Please continue this! It's so well written, and made me cry (thats when you know a story's good) I love it! Write more!

Awesome chapter! I love it! I love this story so much! Please update soon! :D

Poor James! :( This story so far has made me cry! :'(

That's horrible! Why would someone do that? :(

I love the story! Kind of a lot! James is my favorite character and there is so much angst I just love it! Please update ASAP!

thank you for choosing my charcter as james sister

Thank you so much for picking my characters! Please update soon, I'm really excited for this story!

Thank you so much for picking me! :)

I saw mine was the last one you announced and I nearly freaked when I saw. Thanks!

Name (Full name which includes a middle name): Erica LeAnn Roberts

Age: 17

Appearance: Jet black hair with bleached out bangs that are dyed purple. Bright green eyes. 5'6". Wears purple square rimmed glasses. Slender

Talent (Like dancer, actor/actress, singer, etc.): Sings and writes music

Hobbies:Photography, writing music, painting.

Likes:The rain, the beach, animals, scary movies, the dark.

Dislikes: quiet.

Family: Marie(mom age 43). Jack(dad age 45). Dani(little sister age 15)

Background (Childhood to now): Grew up in Ocean City, NJ. Graduated HS a year early with Honors. Moved out to LA so her sister could pursue acting.

Favourite BTR member: Kendall

Personality:Outspoken, Sarcastic, Optimistic, Friendly.

Great chapter!

Here's my OC.

Name (Full name which includes a middle name): Ariyena (Ari) Leslie Jones

Age: Sixteen

Appearance: Dark red hair to her shoulders with a side fringe. Tall, about 5'9', slim, athletic.

Talent (Like dancer, actor/actress, singer, etc.): Singer/Songwriter

Hobbies: Snowboarding, basketball, stunts, swimming, singing, playing guitar.

Likes: Pizza, annoying Bitters, Logan, math, animals.

Dislikes: Science, posers, stalkers, abusers (parents or boyfriends/girlfriends)

Family: Mother Anna (37), Father Joshua (38), sister Kellie (7), brother Andrew (12).

Background (Childhood to now): When she was little, Ariyena showed a remarkable about of talent as a singer and guitar played from when she was about six to seven. Her parents were happy to let her do singing, if that was what she wanted. Her brother Andrew is an actor and he is staying at the Palm Woods but he invited Ariyena up to LA from Texas to see if she can jump start her singing career. Andrew thinks of talking to Gustavo about a record deal for Ariyena but Ariyena doesn't want to get started just yet. She flew out to LA to stay with her brother for a couple of weeks before she wants to find a label to sign her.

Favourite BTR member: Logan

Personality: Shy but sweet and caring. Happy to meet new people but sometimes does get sad and she also writes songs when her mood changes from happy to sad and vise versa.

Other (anything you wanna add): Ariyena also dabbled a little in acting when she was younger but she found that music was her calling.

Name (Full name which includes a middle name):Kellie Rose Miller

Age:16

Appearance:She is 5'0 she has mid-back wavy brown hair, with blond highlights(from the sun) she has brown eyes. a dancers body. A lot of freckles, around her nose and cheeks. and she scar next to her right eye(you can only see it if your looking for it) and one on her knee and some on her legs and stomach(from a car accident). Also she is a bit of a klutz!

Talent (Like dancer, actor/actress, singer, etc.): singer

Hobbies:she is a singer,cheerleader,listening to music, playing guitar, teach cheer leading, read, write, dance, musicals and dramas at school, watching movies...

Likes:her friends, her guitar and music, basketball, baseball, soccer, swimming, dancing, acting, writing, singing and writing songs

Dislikes:liars, mean people, her brothers,rejections, spiders, back stabbers...OH and snakes!

Family:Mom and dad, 1 younger sister (13, Taylor) 3 older brothers (19,Chris, 17 Tim, 16 aka my Twin Matt)

Background (Childhood to now):Kellie was born on August 22nd 1994, her mom and dad already had 2 other children, both boys so to her mom getting a girl was the best thing. She is the younger of the twins so as she grew up her older brothers were very protective of her.

After living in Ohio for a few years when Kellie and Matt were 2 the family decided to move to Minnesota where they moved in next door to the Diamond family. Kendall was a year older than Kellie so he got along very well with her older brothers.

When Kellie was 3, her youngest sister Taylor was born. That was also the time when her mom and dad realized she had great talent in not only dance, but in music.

She started in dance lessons and when she was 5 going to her first dance recital she was in a car accident and the doctor's did not know if she would live through it because the car hit directly on her side of the car. Kendall would visit her every single day hoping his best friend would get better. After about 2 weeks she was finally able to be discharged from the hospital, but would not dance for a while.

When Kendall, Kellie and Matt all started middle school, Kendall meet James, Logan and Carlos while playing hockey at the ice-rink in town with Matt and Kellie. From then on the 6 of them became inseparable, but Kendall was still closest with Kellie, he called her Bells or Rose just to see her smile.

When Kellie was 14 and Kendall 15, he asked her out on their first date, which their parents had been waiting for for years. The two started dating from then and when Kendall was 17, he and the boys minus Matt got an audition to be in a band. The day of the audition was the last time Kellie ever saw Kendall, he left without so much as a goodbye...or a see you soon.

It broke Kellie's heart, she didn't sleep or eat for days, she just cried. Soon enough she began to write down her feelings into songs because it was easier than facing reality.

Favourite BTR member: Kendall

Personality:she is shy when i 1st meet people. Then after a while she become a lot of fun and really love to help her friends! she is loyal and a good listener! at times she am random, but she will always out to help any one in need! she listens and she gives them(anyone)advice. she accept everyone when she know them, she doesn't judge them at first time, she likes to laugh a lot even when she shouldn’t, she am very cheerful she try to see most of the time everything positive

Other (anything you wanna add): I could be Kendall's old flame, if you need one

I already submitted an OC, this is an actual review from moi now lol

I'm really growing on this story because no one really knows the other three member's home life, especially James and Logan. Although it sounds like such a morbid twist, you've actually turned it into a really good story and I really like reading this story.

Keep up the awesome work!

okay, so this is actually my review for chapter 3 but i submitted an OC for that one. I just thought i should let you know that I will be reading this story if you pick my OCs or not. Its a grasping concept and a touchy subject but you seem to be portraying in very well so far. I am a weirdo but i love angsty stories, I don't know why. This story has premise and plot and it's a story I will continue reading; awaiting the next update on the edge of my seat. Update as soon as possible :P

~Annalise