Good pep talk - and interesting perspective on the protectiveness of both of them. Great work.

I like it. Fixes so much I had problems with that season.

Very nice. I do appreciate the occasional "get it off your chest" fic. They can be very therapeutic for writers and readers who feel that way. It was nice hearing more from Eliot that we do on the show. Very nice job

First, Bravo Eliot! Well said and well handled. I really like this piece because I see so many hidden layers in the relationship between Nate and Eliot. I was really pissed with Sophie's character for leaving and I felt really bad for Nate throughout. Your portrayal of Eliot's loyalty is perfect. As is this line:

Now he was done with coddling any of them. "There's a lot you don't know about me," he said. "Sometimes I think none of you know me at all."

Splendid job!

~WalkingInDarkness737~

great fic )

i am so waiting for someone to tell sophie off... grr

and she's the one who betray the team back at the first david, and nate's the one who got arrested so they could escape. u.u''

nway, just what I'm hoping to see for real on the show )

THIS! THISTHISTHISTHISTHIS

THANK YOU VOICE OF REASON! You've just said every grumbling I've had in this season and voiced it passionately through a well written Eliot. I could hear those lines being delivered through all the characters and it fill them perfectly. Now if they would just say this in the show, life would be golden ;D

Great story! So love Eliot!

Great story. I love that you had Eliot being the one to tell off Hardison and Sophie, although I don't really think Parker deserves telling off since she isn't really treating Nate differently this season (at least so far). I love Eliot's view point on the possible Parker/Hardison almost romance the show has going on, too. I also really liked that you pointed out that Hardison is so not ready to even think of leading a team yet because he really doesn't see the big picture or over all design of the con and its consequences.

You also pointed out something that had been bothering me about last night's episode that I couldn't seem to get a fix on-why was it suddenly so horrible for Parker to be put in danger? And for that matter, why did it only seem to bother Hardison and Sophie? Parker wasn't complaining and kept it together to do her part of the job (unless I missed something). I get that Hardison was upset over being hypnotized and I understand it, but I can also see why Nate did it and Sophie helped, so she must not have minded that too much.

Very nice story. Can't wait to see more from you.

Susan S

Great story. Hope you write more soon.

Thank you. I've been feeling the same way about Sohpie. It's rather frustrating. And Hardison, I can't blame Nate for doing what he did at all - way to many varibles for it to be ok for H to know that N was going to hypnitize him. Parker... well Parker is Parker. *shrug*

Yay Eliot :)