Very good, I enjoyed immensely

REVS ENGINE LOUDLY
You literally wrote this four years ago, but here I am writing a review for it B)

This fic was amazing, and your writing of the characters and the smut was literally beautiful and wonderful. It was honestly fantastic, and a joy to read

This was one of the most amazing pieces of writing I have ever had the pleasure of stumbling upon.
Bravo, amazing, words can't describe. . .!

This was the sweetest and most romantic story I've ever read! I couldn't stop reading. So innocent and sweet, yet incredibly hot at the same time. I actually almost cried at the end!
You stayed in characters really well, I can totally see them acting that way. You described everything so well too.

The only thing bothering me is that I don't feel like reading any other stories anymore ;D Nothing could beat this cute lemon fluff...

I really love your writing style! Completely well-written and love the details and efforts you put in. Plus I like Snow and Serah as a couple so I might be biased too... :p

Enjoyed your story overall! :)

OMG I LOVED IT!

It has soooo much detail put into it and it was amazing from beginning to end!

I also loved that the characters were so in character! Love it!

OMG I'm jealous, it seems better than mine! I love it!(: I Shall cherish this n.n Snow&Serah Forever!

Oh so lovely! I love Snow and Serah's relationship, I wish they got more love!

I enjoyed it. Even though I'm more of a fan of Lighting x Snow, this was still good.

FINALLY. A Snow and Serah fanfiction that's quality.

amazing story! simply beautiful! this is a work of art absolutely riveting i loved it :D

amazing story! simply beautiful! this is a work of art absolutely riveting i loved i loved it :D

Wow. Simply wow. Usually I hate one chapter stories that are focused on a sex scene but this was incredibly well written, long, and just perfect. Most stories are just "wham bam, thank you ma'am" but this story is far from that. Excellent job! I congratulate you, and thank you for writing this.

Oh my god! The only reason I started writing my fanfictions was because of THIS ONE RIGHT HERE! And lo and behold, you have two of my stories in your favorites! I am overwhelmed here! I have to thank you so much! Not only is your story stunning with the description, it is one of the few SerahxSnow fanfictions out there. Thank you so much, you wonderful person!

I don't like Snow very much, but I have to say that I adore him in this story, which was very well written by the way. I love how you portray Snow as a complete gentleman in bed, even though he's so rebellious when he's not with Serah. :) This was a really cute and sweet story, and I must commend you for giving so much care to the details of the sex. Does it make sense to say that the sex was 'in character'?

Thanks for writing this beautiful piece. :)